the prepositions taste better when they're not the most important; original poetry

Nov 11, 2010 23:54

When I kiss you, there’s blood in my mouth. In yours or in mine?
No, from. From.
I press harder. Maybe in both.

Our red-streaked tongues not caring for a second of it. Our bruised knuckles are oblivious.

From mine to yours, this red will flow.
See, from. From mine. It works better that way ( Read more... )

rating: pg, original: poetry

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rorylie November 12 2010, 00:08:03 UTC
This part:I was pulling feathers out from under your wings

And this: But I carried on writing my name with the ink you gave me,

Just kill me. Like, gut me.

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clockwork_jo November 12 2010, 00:21:29 UTC
Ow. That means so much to me. You have no idea.

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