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Luck Within An Accident

Aug 10, 2013 13:00

One Shot

Title: Luck Within An Accident
Author: ( Read more... )

merrikat, one shot, smut, sub!zack, jack and zack, top!jack, all time low, nc-17, watersports, bottom!zack, standalone, jack barakat and zack merrick, kink

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atlaregay October 24 2013, 00:24:45 UTC

I read this on Mibba but I don't have an account there, so I couldn't comment, but I realised you posted it on your LJ too!

I liked it, I'm a big fan of watersports. I know you filled a request for it, that was good of you. You should write more!

I don't want to come off as rude, so I'm going to ask you first, but do you mind if I maybe gave you some constructive criticism? I always feel like an ass doing that but I like to help out other writers. xo

sorry_n0tsorry October 24 2013, 04:52:26 UTC

Thanks, I'm really happy you liked it!
And I wouldn't mind getting criticism at all. People have said before I make grammar/spelling errors but they never tell me what. I'm here to learn and I would be very happy if you could help me.
xxx

atlaregay October 24 2013, 23:06:26 UTC

Okay, awesome! I think you'd benefit from a BETA to correct the grammar and spelling -- there's a list of people who will BETA your work right here: http://alltimefanfiction.tumblr.com/betalist... )

sorry_n0tsorry October 25 2013, 05:02:56 UTC

Thanks, I really appreciate that you want to help you make my writing better.

I kinda look up to you (sorry if it sounds weird) and you're really good at writing. Your fics are amazing!

Thanks for the help <3
xxx

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