I love your Uhura. She's a good friend to Jim, but she also knows when to kick his butt. Of course she'd be observant. Glad Jim decided to listen to her.
The ball really was in Jim's court, as it were. Time for him to make his move, and what a move! It's kind of an adjustment for me to see Jim this...passive. Not a criticism, because your Jim is also a parent and trying to make responsible choices. Would love for you to crawl around in Bones's mind, too.
I'm glad Uhura is well-received. Writing her in character is sometimes the easiest thing while bordering on difficult. I'm always afraid she'll come off as OOC.
And thank you! I really kind of want this story (what is actually slowly evolving into a series) to follow along from the Jim we're seeing now (kinda passive) to the Jim we saw in the movie. Hopefully I do it right. But I'm glad you still thinks it's acceptable, and not going over the line.
Will probably crawl around in Bones' mind after this story. Probably have a one shot or something. I don't know. I think it's just a little too late to suddenly switch to Bones' POV.
Sooo happy to see another part of this - I love this series so much! YAAAAAAY to Jim for finally giving up the ghost and just GOING FOR IT!!! Bones' reaction is priceless and the resulting make-out scene was delicious and appreciated! Cannot wait to see what happens next - thanks for posting!!!
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Lemme go to choir and I'll come back and squee some more.
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Have fun at choir!
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I love your Uhura. She's a good friend to Jim, but she also knows when to kick his butt. Of course she'd be observant. Glad Jim decided to listen to her.
The ball really was in Jim's court, as it were. Time for him to make his move, and what a move! It's kind of an adjustment for me to see Jim this...passive. Not a criticism, because your Jim is also a parent and trying to make responsible choices. Would love for you to crawl around in Bones's mind, too.
Lovely! I'm off to read the next part.
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And thank you! I really kind of want this story (what is actually slowly evolving into a series) to follow along from the Jim we're seeing now (kinda passive) to the Jim we saw in the movie. Hopefully I do it right. But I'm glad you still thinks it's acceptable, and not going over the line.
Will probably crawl around in Bones' mind after this story. Probably have a one shot or something. I don't know. I think it's just a little too late to suddenly switch to Bones' POV.
Thanks again.
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Oh man...this chapter...just..wow! So much love for this!
I love you for how you've done this!!!
*big hugs* xxxx
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And I love you...well, just for being you, but also for enjoying this.
Loves!
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Me and the muse really kinda did a happy dance. I have to admit it.
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