I finished this in kind of a rush and in the middle of Starbucks, so if you spot any typos, etc., please don't hesitate to let me know! (I mean... not that you ever need to hesitate, even for a fic I spend a million years writing, but you know.)
Title: Need-To-Know
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sororculaPairing/Characters: Amita Ramanujan/Marshall Penfield, OMCs
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Marshall's longer legs take him out in front, and Amita wonders if he'll leave her behind, every man for himself--she resigns herself to it, because logically they should split up, and there's nothing tying them to each other--but he reaches his hand back and she grabs it and runs faster than she has in her life, alarm blasting behind them.
Very nice, sweetie! ♥ ♥
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You caught Amita nicely - from her idealism and trust even when presented with the worst of humanity. That last paragraph particularly nailed it.
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Thank you so much!
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she can overcome any hardship, triumph over any adversity.
nice work!
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