Numb3rs drabble: Safe (Charlie, Don, Liz, PG-13)

May 05, 2009 00:43

So, back in February I posted This Time and for some reason people clamored for a sequel. OKAY, YOU GUYS. I wrote one. I hope it's not lame! That's the problem with sequels. Always leave 'em wanting more, that's what I always say. (I actually never say that. "Fake it till you make it" is my cliché phrase of choice.) Forgive me for the title. It's ( Read more... )

numb3rs100, fanfiction, rated pg-13, n3 fic, drabbles, gen, numb3rs

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1trackmind May 5 2009, 18:26:01 UTC
"Damn it, Charlie."

I love that. It sounds just like Don. Exasperated and scared and grateful all at once.

Well done!

And I agree with thewhiteowl, he's lucky it's just bruises and not a gunshot wound.

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sororcula May 5 2009, 23:14:31 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

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emmademarais May 5 2009, 20:06:13 UTC
Yay!

Clearly I went to bed too soon if I missed this last night!

See, there's value in giving people what they want from time to time and I ♥ my H/C as you know so this was a lovely fic. Thank you.

/hides cest goggles/

I like when Don allows himself to show how he feels about his brother and what better time than this to give in and just hold him close. I love the visual of all the action around them and they're just stasnding there together. /sniff/

Very well done my dear. Further proof you deserve your awards. /bows to you/

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sororcula May 5 2009, 23:16:25 UTC
I was on a roll! Usually I have to post things as soon as I write them so I don't chicken out or get caught up in making a million edits.

Now that you mention H/C I'm sorry I didn't make it hospital fic. ;-)

Thanks!

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emmademarais May 5 2009, 23:41:13 UTC
Oh! Hospital fic!

See, in my mind what happens just after this is Charlie collapses in Don's arms and Don, panicked, yells for a medic as he cradle's Charlie's unconscious form in his arms. Then we have the lovely desperate hand holding in the ambulance and the frantic wait in the ER for news...

But that's just me the H/C junkie talking.

I mean, why do you think N100 *has* a Hospital prompt? ;-)

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devon99 May 5 2009, 21:26:36 UTC
Fabulous. Loved it.

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sororcula May 5 2009, 23:16:33 UTC
Thanks!

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loozy May 5 2009, 21:54:48 UTC
So much intensity in such a short amount of words...

Savage!

And it has hurt!Don! Wheee!

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sororcula May 5 2009, 23:16:50 UTC
Haha. Thank you!

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