Numb3rs drabble: Find X (Don, Colby, Charlie, David, G)

Feb 23, 2009 22:35

Title: Find X
Characters: Don, Colby, Charlie, David
Rating: G
Summary: Don followed Colby's gaze.
Word Count: 100
Spoilers: none
Notes/Warnings: Many thanks to mercilynn for making this better than it would have been otherwise, and for the title. AU.
Prompt: #78 "Sister" at numb3rs100
Disclaimer: I don't own these characters, nor do I profit from their use here. ( Read more... )

numb3rs100, fanfiction, n3 fic, rated g, drabbles, gen, numb3rs

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mercilynn February 24 2009, 06:42:23 UTC
♥ SO MUCH ♥

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sororcula February 24 2009, 06:46:01 UTC

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rodlox February 24 2009, 06:44:17 UTC
this is girl!Charlie, right?

it's interesting, most certainly.

for a moment there, I thought it was a drabble which introduced a third sibling to Alan's brood. (not unknown, granted; I've committed that myself)

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sororcula February 24 2009, 06:47:35 UTC
It is! I was trying really really hard not to give it away before the ending, but I did realize that might mean sacrificing clarity. :-/ I'm glad you got it!

(And introducing a third--or, like, FIFTH--sibling to the family is definitely not something I would put past me! Haha.)

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rodlox February 24 2009, 07:42:34 UTC
I had to re-read it a few times...to be sure Colby was looking where I thought he was looking.

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ladygray99 February 24 2009, 07:56:20 UTC
hehe. I'm actually working on a long girl!Charlie fic that has a scene rather like this so it was cool to see it here.

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sororcula February 24 2009, 08:40:06 UTC
Sweet! I want to write a long girl!Charlie fic but I only have the very vaguest of plot ideas for it.

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ladygray99 February 24 2009, 09:07:04 UTC
I've got my plot pretty solid. I'm about a third of the way through. I'm basically starting at the top of season 2 and sticking to cannon as close as I can.

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sororcula February 24 2009, 20:15:27 UTC
Ooh, interesting. The ideas I have are mostly pre-series and incestuous. *cough*

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mia_dcwut_09 February 25 2009, 00:49:42 UTC
lol girl!charlie so funny to read

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sororcula February 25 2009, 01:24:53 UTC
:-)

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rubynye March 15 2009, 00:44:18 UTC
girl!Charlie from your keyboard! And Colby left without enough blood above his waist to operate his brain! This just gets better and better.

(Also, hi. :) Hopefully, I'm back, and I'm sorry for having been gone for so long.)

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sororcula March 15 2009, 00:55:41 UTC
Hee! Colby is even more entranced with girl!Charlie than he is with boy!Charlie. (Which is to say, very.)

Hello! It's lovely to have you around again! :-)

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