FF: In the Great White North

[leli_5]

Title: In the Great White North

Author: Leli

Prompt: (#133) Josh/Donna - She was only Canadian for about half an hour, but that doesn't mean he isn't going to tease her about it.

Fandom: The West Wing

Rating: PG

Characters/Pairings: Josh/Donna. Sam makes a brief appearance.

Warning: Nothing, really. Spoilers up to Swiss Diplomacy, I suppose

Comments

[cre8tiveye]

The dialogue, the descriptions, the HEAT between Josh and Donna in this story is fabulous. Terrific, and I mean *terrific* job on this. You really nailed the characterization. It's hard to single out my favorite part or line, but Donna flirting with the Hertz guy and saying, “I have a… thing… for Chryslers" was outstanding. Throughout the story, I had a clear picture in my mind of what these two were doing -- what they looked like, how they felt, etc. It was almost as if I was watching it on TV.

Very, very well done.

[keeper_of_stars]

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