But I want more! Excellent story. I think you wrote it very well. How you had them figure out where Jensen was hidden was both suspenseful and convincing. The story did seem to start in the middle though, and you caught up on details later. Which worked out, once I had double checked that yes, this was the first chapter. Great story, very creepy.
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Excellent story. I think you wrote it very well. How you had them figure out where Jensen was hidden was both suspenseful and convincing. The story did seem to start in the middle though, and you caught up on details later. Which worked out, once I had double checked that yes, this was the first chapter.
Great story, very creepy.
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