WIP Fic: Halloween, Top Gear Style

[sophiaofwolven]

Title: Halloween, Top Gear style
Rating: G 
Summary: Perhaps Jeremy and the gang should have  paid attention to Stig's behaviour and take it serious.
Pairings: Mentioned, but not present.
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Comments

[captlebubbles]

Excellant! I do believe this is the first ever use of the fanfic cliche 'the characters are turned into children' so well done!

[sophiaofwolven]

Thanks! Glad you like it. I did think I was the first person to write this into Top Gear fandom. I've seen one based on when they were children, but that's it.

[captlebubbles]

There are two where they are children (both of them school au's, one of them the one we did that one time), but this is (unless I'm mistaken) the first one where they were turned into children.

[sophiaofwolven]

I think your right. So I feel special for such an act. I would have thought with the Stig it was an obvious act to do.

[sophiaofwolven]

Just point them out in a comment. It means people will see what mistakes have being found - but thanks for noticing. *hugs*

[sophiaofwolven]

Even more reason to point them out in a comment. It won't only help me, but get rid of that itching feeling of wanting to change them. Trust me, I love to recive the crit as it helps me improve. :) Comments are faster as well.

[sophiaofwolven]

Thank you! I've changed everything you've told me to now. *hugs*

Because they ARE five-year-olds...

[lasayla]

“Stig, why did you have to turn us into five year olds?”
He cocked his head to one side as if to say ‘think about it’

Ha! Best and completest excuse for a fanfic de-aging ever!

[lasayla]

But following on from Rand's comments, I'd snag a beta for part two. There are some little errors that are difficult to pick up on your own. "Grab some of the clothing they had grabbed." That sort of thing.