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The Scenic Route

Feb 05, 2014 20:23

★Title: The Scenic Route for silentcrows ♡
★Pairing: Kyungsoo/Kai (+ minor Kyungsoo/Luhan)
★Rating: nc-17
★Length: 2500 words
★Summary: Jongin is a pit-stop on Kyungsoo’s way to happily ever after, but he’s one hell of a distraction and Kyungsoo doesn’t mind that one bit.

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p: kai/kyungsoo, day 4, m: kai, fic

Comments 5

silentcrows February 6 2014, 13:52:25 UTC

can't properly comment right now, but SPOTSPOTSPOT. i will be back!

silentcrows February 7 2014, 12:05:57 UTC

okay, okay, this whole piece just has a really distinct mood to it, a feeling of restlessness or just disappointment and resignation. ugh, i can't put it into words well, but i really like the idea you groomed. (and you chose kaisoo as the pairing /sobs/ and added some hansoo /sobs harder/) thank you very much!

uponinfinity February 7 2014, 16:50:11 UTC

hello first of all can i just say this was brilliant but i don't read smut so i had to skip the bottom bits i'm sorry

anw

idk if you meant for there to be focus on hansoo but?? i??? couldn't help myself omG i literally just lOVEd how their relationship is portrayed so realistically like - like they know that whatever it is that they have between them has reached a plateau and the only thing they can get from one another is carnal fulfilment and that's exactly what both intend to take.

This is it.

This is the end.

And it’s alright because they both knew it was coming because there’s nothing left to offer each other.that last LINE you will be charged with my death be sure of it omg i just love it a lot because both of them know that the only thing the other has to offer is their body - their hearts have long switched off and if there's anything to be taken from the burning relics of their relationship they might as well take it. i might be reading too much into this but it makes the characters more believable in the sense that it ( ... )

cherrysoo February 11 2014, 20:09:15 UTC

i j u s t loved this so much i ??? i'm incoherent right now bc it's really late bUT I JUST NEED YOU TO KNOW IT WAS BEAUTIFUL THANK YOU FOR THIS

spaceturnsaskew February 18 2014, 21:21:39 UTC

wow this was really nice ;-; even though they don't actually get together it was great and beautifully written!