Fish Story (More or Less)

Jan 18, 2015 01:17

ʚ Title: Fish Story (More or Less) for skyroll
ʚ Pairing(s): Chanyeol/Kyungsoo
ʚ Rating: R
ʚ Warnings: Tentacle porn
ʚ Word Count: 6,719 words
ʚ Summary: The tale of fisherman Kyungsoo, who was fooled twice by the ocean, and octoman Chanyeol, who's truly a scientist.
ʚ Message for your recipient/author note: I Did My Very Best But Anyway Sorry

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p: chanyeol/kyungsoo, m: chanyeol, day 7, round 2

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yakiseop January 25 2015, 23:43:57 UTC
HEHE HOHO THANK YOU I TRY no seriously thank you so much
chansoo is chansoo even if it involves octopi
thank you for reading and commenting my friend ♥

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drainbamage954 January 18 2015, 17:21:23 UTC
this is probably one of the greatest gems i've read in a very long time. it was hysterically funny, wonderfully written, and the porn was delightful. thank you so much for writing this as it honestly is just so much fun!

thank you dear author!!! this was truly a fantastically fun read!

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yakiseop January 25 2015, 23:58:36 UTC
omg thanks ;;;;;;;;; it's me who should be thanking you! thank you a lot for reading and commenting ;;; ♥

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bluedreaming January 18 2015, 23:25:40 UTC
First of all: tentacles. Tentacles. Well-written wonderful playful delightful electrifyingly hot tentacles. Octoman! Octoman Chanyeol is still so Chanyeol and fisher Kyungsoo is delightfully Kyungsoo, skeptical but prepared, analytical - this was a fabulous fabulous read and the tone of the story made it unique as well, a kind of dry Kyungsoo-like humour, the announcement of the parts of the story, the meta of the narrator directly addressing the audience. Wonderful. Thank you so much for writing this.

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yakiseop January 26 2015, 00:00:19 UTC
helloooo you, i'm so glad you like this!!!! tale-telling like this is so much easier to write than conventional narrative wheezes i wish i could do this all the time
thank you a lot for reading this!! and for leaving me this comment!!! ♥♥

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skyroll January 19 2015, 05:52:23 UTC
SO! FIRST OFF, I'M HAPPY YOU WENT WITH THIS PROMPT BECAUSE WOW

i've always wondered what tentacle fic would be like with cy as the tentacle person and wow, it's better than i imagined!

i love your writing! everything from the words you use, to the humor and the sex. especially the sex because WOW OMG

It’s just like a mermaid, but it’s a dude, and instead of a fish tail, it has an octopus... or squid? … ‘tail’, per se. Tentacles. Just, tentacles. Also, the thing doesn’t look like it would sing to Kyungsoo to lure him into the sea, so...
omg

What he thought had been merely a blink had actually been several hours of sleep, and, when he wakes up from it, the sky is dark with the last colors of the sunset.
i just like this line

also, wow kyungsoo

He just stays there, holding on tightly as Chanyeol shoots his squirmy body towards the beach at top speed.
i'm sorry this made me laugh because all i'm imagining is kyungsoo using chanyeol like a jetski

When he gets home that night, Kyungsoo sees himself in his bathroom’s mirror, and ( ... )

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yakiseop January 26 2015, 00:04:44 UTC
EEEEE HELLO RECIPIENT this is always the best comment it always let us know if the work paid off

tbh chanyeol as the tentacle dude was the obvious route to me bc even if kyungsoo was the tentacles he'd still be small, imagine how much effort he'd have to put in lifting chanyeol in the air
"Also, the thing doesn’t look like it would sing to Kyungsoo to lure him into the sea, so..." kyungsoo was wrong in thinking this

"all i'm imagining is kyungsoo using chanyeol like a jetski " THAT'S A BIT HOW OCTOPI SWIM SO THIS IS ACTUALLY A CORRECT MENTAL IMAGE
yes Octonerd i should've just titled this "Kyungsoo and The Octonerd"

no thank YOU for the prompts!! and for reading!!!! and for commenting!! thank you!!! ♥♥♥

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seafoamblues January 19 2015, 10:17:49 UTC
HOLY SHIT AW MAN GOOD GOD GOOD GOSH GOOD GOLLY
that was. some amazing tentacle porn right there. like. wow. probably the hottest ive read. and like. Damn. JUST THE WAY YOU GO ABOUT IT?? chanyeol exploring his body and stuff and i just-- cant. right now. IT WAS ENDEARING AND SEXY AF AT THE SAME TIME.
tbh i only read the porn part bc its four in the fuckin morning but i'll be back to read the rest. hoooooooly shit.

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yakiseop January 26 2015, 00:07:02 UTC
hehehehHEHEHEHEHE HELLO SHERYL.................
i can't believe you only read the porn how did it even make sense to you
also thank you tbh i wrote all of the porn in a late-night rush and didn't really do a lucid rereading before submitting... then i came here afterwards to check and was like jesus this is the worst.....................
so thank you for even liking it tbh.........
and ofc thank you for reading and commenting uwu ♥

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seafoamblues January 26 2015, 02:32:19 UTC
flaV I AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
you butt
i used context clues it wasn't that hard. i still need to read the non-smut. i'm going to just for youuuuuuuuuuu because i love you and love your writing <33
wtf it's so good tho HOW HOW DO U DO IT ???? I NEED 2 KNO...........

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