(Is This) More than You Bargained For

Jan 15, 2015 00:02

ʚ Title: (Is This) More than You Bargained For for layqur
ʚ Pairing(s): Kyungsoo/Lu Han (mentioned Baekhyun/Chanyeol and slight!Lu Han/Minseok)
ʚ Rating: R
ʚ Warnings: sexual content, language, cockroaches
ʚ Word count: 3,900 words
ʚ Summary: no training course could prepare Kyungsoo for Lu Han, foreign exchange student and football extraordinaire. ( Read more... )

m: luhan, p: luhan/kyungsoo, day 4, round 2

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soft_daisy January 16 2015, 04:26:47 UTC
This is so cute! Like. Just. Really really cute. ^^ ♥ I love how you took the time to describe how they met and how against all odds of their personalities, developed a comfortable and unlikely friendship. Kyungsoo being annoyed by Luhan but completely tolerating him (and his thoughts about how Minseok is probably just tolerating Luhan too) made me grin and I could imagine it all in my head. My favorite part was probably Kyungsoo and Luhan ending up both screaming about the cockroach and Minseok having to calmly kill it for them. >< hahaaa, really enjoyed this fic, and the ending of this seemed like a bonus. I love how them falling in like with each other was so subtle and left unstated. Thank you so much for writing and sharing with us. I want to quote all of this but I will spare you lol. ^^

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seafoamblues January 26 2015, 02:16:13 UTC
ahhhhhh thank you so much for this super nice comment!!!!!!! <33
cockroach thing really happened irl. huge flying roaches are terrifying.

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hipployta January 19 2015, 02:40:15 UTC
LOL...Luhan working his way into Kyungsoo's heart...and BFF Minseok is being Minseok LOL

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seafoamblues January 26 2015, 02:17:22 UTC
ehe thank you for reading and commenting!! :))

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latinaeinstein January 22 2015, 10:28:52 UTC
i liked this a lot

i just really love lu han in this
his little baby crush on minseok (and minseok's exasperated indifferent about the whole thing, otP)
how he touches kyungsoo to thank him for helping/doing his homework (and how kyungsoo allows it, oh man)
how he's kind of a headache, but also nice to keep around
how he can't say his name right, except to name "im lonely hamsters" after him
how he's scared of bugs
how they're both scared of bugs
how they keep dancing around and hinting at this thing
how they use "singing" as code for sex acts
just a+ all around

also
He's wrapped up in Lu Han and Lu Han is what he's wanted for a while now.
thanks for not being dense about it anymore, baby boy

and thank you for writing it :))))))

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seafoamblues January 26 2015, 02:19:04 UTC
i was afraid i made lu han too annoying....... thank
MINSEOK IS SO
"im lonely hamsters" skdfj saFFUCK
no lie just days after my roommate moved out, i bought an "im lonely hamster."
thank you sarai <3333333333 !!!!! i'm glad you liked it!

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anonymous November 10 2015, 06:16:55 UTC
ieI LOVE THIS, I LOVEED THIS i love this, i love yieu
and kyungsoo wanting him to sing uwu)
and it reminded me of that show time ep where both of them are afraid haha but here it's just roaches lol
and i can totally relate with kyungsoo, if thing's start flying i'm out...

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