there's no right of way

[sonofon]

anonymous writing feedback goes here

because I think it'd be really cool if I could know what people really think of how I write. And this way, I can keep track of it, ha. Whether it's boring or bearable, don't hesitate in letting me know what you like or don't like about my writing! Similarly, have you ever wanted to ask me something about my

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[leriacossato]

YOUR WRITING SUCKS.

love vita C:

[leriacossato]

no actually i love your writing more than life itself.

only thing i would say is that sometimes you put in run on sentences that are so run on it gets confusing as to what is happening.
that's the only thing though :3

[sonofon]

thanks for pointing that out. &hearts I speak in too many run-ons and I guess it carries over into my writing XD;

[leriacossato]

no problems bby &hearts

XD i would do one of these as well but everyone would be like: YOU ARE OVER DRAMATIC AND YOUR WRITING FAILS.

/flails

[razzlie]

uh i hate your writing :I like vita said it sucks

....

just kidding ♥

I think your writing is rather lovely ♥

[sonofon]

why do you guys do this to me ;___;

aw thank you bb ;; &hearts

[razzlie]

WE LOVE TEASING YOU THAT'S WHY ♥
we both love you and that is our way of showing affection :3

;w; welcome Sono ♥

[sonofon]

YOU GUYS ARE AWFUL
why on earth do i love you so )8

&hearts

ew what's a shift key

[merubear]

hey I was going to do the whole YOUR WRITING SUCKS. D=

b-but the thing that I always go whining to you about the run-ons has been said and you know me and the effect of wanting to insert commas into every sentence you have. ♥

your writing is so graceful it's like a gazelle in a field of poppies or something. yeah, a gazelle high on opium, that sounds good. graceful and strange and wonderfully woozy and quite beautiful in general~

tl;dr ilu and your writing and stop writing forever so I can feel better about myself kthnxbai

obviously something that's not cool

[sonofon]

well you were TOO SLOW obviously

I swear I don't purposefully go around making run-ons but it happens and I'll try my best but please excuse my awful English in the mean time ;w; But, I mean, you know me and my semi-colons.

a gazelle high on opium

from now I will use this to describe my writing because that is some beautiful imagery. thank you bb &hearts i haven't seen you in like forever whoa whoa D:

you mean like me

[merubear]

it's not my fault I have a bit butt D= waitwhat

it's called a meruphor, thank you very much. I have many of these in stock and they only come for the low low price of your soul <3

;_____; daddddyyyyy

no like me

[sonofon]

you were never efficient enough, daughter. i am disappoint

What if I've already sold my soul to someone? D: Do I still get meruphors?

daughterrrr ;_____; once father is done with college apps, we will spend more time together, i promise

[anonymous]

I'm a weird person who loves your run-ons ♥. /is attacked by grammar nazis

Seriously though, idk why I love them but for me they make your fics feel more flow-y? /wait wtf ignore this just wanted to let you know I love how you write kjjgkjgkjg ♥

[sonofon]

When I write, it's more about capturing a feeling, if that makes sense? XD I have this "feeling" that I want to translate into words. I don't do it a lot, but that's why I really like stream of consciousness type of dialogue and prose. Though, that's probably also why I end up with the run-ons. I ramble ;w;

Aww, thank you! &hearts and also, anon, have I ever told you how cute your alternating letter keysmashes are? djdjdjdd &hearts

[m_nemonica]

i was gonna be all like 'inb4 why is your writing style so great' but it looks like everyone got to that before me 8|

♥

[sonofon]

oh you guys

&hearts

[m_nemonica]

hey it's only because you're too fucking sexy o///o

also i think i just took your 4000th comment hurhahurhahurhagadu 8D

[sonofon]

o-oh my o///o

you WOULD wouldn't you. are you happy now? )8