Fic: Helping Hand

[soniced_up]

Title: Helping Hand
Author: me soniced_up
Fandom: Doctor Who
Rating: NC-17…this is smut folks, pure, completely adulterated smut.
Pairing: Nine/Rose
Beta: The incomparable brilliantomega, Seriously I gave her a completely rough draft, as I was so frustrated with it I couldn't even do a quick proof read, and she whipped it into shape for me. If you like this and it works

Comments

[soniced_up]

Thanks hun. I know this pairing isn't your cup of tea, but I love that you still read it and enjoy. Thanks for commenting.

[mandragonne]

*unclenches her fingers of her desk*

Yargl.

Short comment, because I don't think my brain will function properly until some (long) time. Aw, long, bad word.

Me feeling all squeeky and awed. And looking forward to reading more from you ;)

Yirkle !

[soniced_up]

Rly? Wow, thanks. Really, I know it's pathetic, but I really need comments like this to help build my confidence as a writer. I really wasn't happy with the first 2/3 of this. So you're comment is really appreciated. I thank you.

[mandragonne]

Ha !

Almost recovered my brains.

Taking advantage of it to say, no, it's not a real masterpiece ready to earn every literary prize in the United Kingdom of Bookish Snobbishism (what ?! a problem with my use of English grammarity ?) but...

Still, I confess to you only I do fancy a bit of PWP from time to time, especially when it comes to [insert PWP subject here]... to smut. Yes. Me like smut. Me had unhappy childhood and all.

Then, no matter what it lacks in, er, plot and dramatic density, I fear your story should earn some prize of it own, as it possesses for sure the uncanny ability to knock a reader senseless, rendering us into a sobbing piece of squeekyness.

You do are loveable.

PS : for I am not entirely sure I made myself (grammatically) clear, I should say, "Excuse my French" - and that would be, ironically, the right thing to say.

[soniced_up]

Yeah it wasn't meant to win literary prizes but if it got this kind of reaction from you then my job is done.

Don't worry about your grammar....you made yourself quite clear. 'GUH' is a language I speak quite well. :P

[jennsthedevil]

dlkfjalewaijroinjagkjhg!@@dslakjfeoi!

Haven't read it yet, but seeing this pop up on my flist in conjunction with the spoiler news which must not be named, may cause me to combust from GLEE!

Off to read now...obviously, I'm not working much this morning. :D

[jennsthedevil]

*flails*

*passes out*

*flails again*

Despite being interrupted TWICE, I've finished it. If I were standing, I'm quite sure I'd be weak in the knees, in addition to being tingly in my nether regions.

This is absolutely perfect and I'm totally incapable of being able to give articulate feedback...other than zomg I love you!!

*tackleglomps*

[soniced_up]

So you liked it then? *GRINS*

You know how much I enjoy making you tingly in your nether regions. ;)

I'm glad you liked it hun...it was written for you after all.

*picks you up*...*watches you fall again* *laughs*

[jennsthedevil]

My office has a glass wall that faces the rest of the office, so I have two people sitting at desks directly facing me...which sometimes makes it hard to read things like smut while at work because I have to watch my facial expressions. I fear that I look waaaaay too happy/satisfied/giddy right now to look like I'm actually working.

What the hell...I've got my smut! Wheeeee! (god, I'm disgustingly giddy this morning)

[karuri]

I know there is so much more to comment about in this, but I have to tell you that this line: "What is it girl? Is it the Doctor?”
made me immediatly think of Lassie and I almost coughed into my green tea.

I can see how this cheered jennisthedevil up XD

[soniced_up]

made me immediatly think of Lassie and I almost coughed into my green tea.

*dies laughing*...I wanted to change that line when my beta brought it to my attention, but she made me keep it to see if anyone would be brave enough to comment on it. You win!!! *hands you cookie*