Awesome as always :D I was suprised that the werewolves made an appearance, but I'm glad that your boyfriend suggested it!
And it's only Alice and Carlisle that have to change first. Poor Alice, she really isn't happy about it is she? But that's understandable. And Carlisle! After all those years of restraint, he's going to become human too. I know that he would do anything to keep his family safe, but do you think he really wants to become human again? :o
And I loved the little bit where Edward freaked Bella out with the pregnant comment XP That was cute.
I haven't decided if Carlisle really wants to become human, or not. I think he would make the decision that kept his family together, regardless of what he wanted personally.
Hope your holiday is relaxing! I'm kind of freaking out about this weekend :) In a good way.
Oh, and the next chapter is up, when you have a chance to read!
Hey! I've been meaning to say hi since your message! Sorry your vacation wasn't as relaxing as you hoped. The fandom kind of exploded while you were away...
Can't wait to hear what you thought of BD!
I've been frantically writing. Turning Back is literally like paragraphs from being done. (And then there's the epilogue, which is going to be really different from the rest of the story, so kind of its own separate thing) I've got to get this thing out of my system before school starts back up in a week and a half!
I loved your description of Alice running with Bella. I never would have thought of that, but then reading your description I can't imagine it any other way. And then for her to voice her trepidation to Bella afterward. Whooh. It does a wonderful job of illustrating that tension where you're both excited and scared, concerned but hopeful, loving but a little annoyed with this human that's both disrupting and holding your family together...
Great Chapter! Enjoyed seeing the werewolves reactions. I feel so bad for Alice! Looking forward to see the vampire/werewolf interactions in the next chapter.
I like this chapter! I'm surprised Carlisle will be in the first batch to get changed simply because he has the most restraint, I'd think he'd need to be there to make sure the others don't go crazy and suck Bella dry.
Did you get your boyfriend to read Twilight? How? I'm trying to get mine to...sometimes he's "ok" with it and will give it a try but other times he sticks his feet in and refuses to budge.
Thank you! You'll see in the new chapter how I get around them actually biting Bella in order to get the antidote to work...I thought Carlisle needed to be in the first batch in order to prevent Demetri from tracking them.
My boyfriend finally decided to read Twilight because he wanted to see what I was so excited about. He likes Buffy and other fantastical stories, so it wasn't too much of a stretch. And I think some of Bella and Edward's less angsty, more funny interactions can appeal to guys too. He'll come around :) Maybe after the movie comes out??
The next chapter is up, if you'd like to continue with the story!
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GOOD JOB!!!! :)
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And it's only Alice and Carlisle that have to change first. Poor Alice, she really isn't happy about it is she? But that's understandable. And Carlisle! After all those years of restraint, he's going to become human too. I know that he would do anything to keep his family safe, but do you think he really wants to become human again? :o
And I loved the little bit where Edward freaked Bella out with the pregnant comment XP That was cute.
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I haven't decided if Carlisle really wants to become human, or not. I think he would make the decision that kept his family together, regardless of what he wanted personally.
Hope your holiday is relaxing! I'm kind of freaking out about this weekend :) In a good way.
Oh, and the next chapter is up, when you have a chance to read!
http://songforevela.livejournal.com/4258.html
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I think you should keep your b/f around for a bit longer then - he sounds useful! ;P
And I agree. Carlisle would do what would he can to keep his family together and safe, and who knows, he may even enjoy it! :D
Awesome - I need to start my fanfiction fix again XP
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Can't wait to hear what you thought of BD!
I've been frantically writing. Turning Back is literally like paragraphs from being done. (And then there's the epilogue, which is going to be really different from the rest of the story, so kind of its own separate thing) I've got to get this thing out of my system before school starts back up in a week and a half!
Hope you're well!
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Chapter 9 is up, if you'd like to continue reading!
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Did you get your boyfriend to read Twilight? How? I'm trying to get mine to...sometimes he's "ok" with it and will give it a try but other times he sticks his feet in and refuses to budge.
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My boyfriend finally decided to read Twilight because he wanted to see what I was so excited about. He likes Buffy and other fantastical stories, so it wasn't too much of a stretch. And I think some of Bella and Edward's less angsty, more funny interactions can appeal to guys too. He'll come around :) Maybe after the movie comes out??
The next chapter is up, if you'd like to continue with the story!
http://songforevela.livejournal.com/4258.html
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