ooc: emotion, play, and story

[songbird9]

I've been turning into a pathetic puddle of angst almost once a month since I became so infatuated with miss Ryuu. This is ridiculous, when any kindness cheers me for hours and any threat of disrespect crushes me. I was crying. Last night I tossed and turned until three. This morning I woke up at six and could barely move out of a shivering ball.

Comments

[belegwen]

It's really good. You have a very good knack for description, I expect because of your artist's eye.

[ryu_saria]

It's actually because the thing I've been trying to improve in my writing for the longest time is description. It actually crippled me in script writing class, since movie scripts are supposed to have short, basic descriptions, but other than that it seems to be working.