[fic] The promise [4/?]

[soneayeong]

Title: The promise
Author: Soneayeong
Genre: Fantasy, Vampire, Angst, Drama and later Smut.
Rating: Nc 17
Length: Chaptered
Pairing: JaeHo \ For this chapter focus JaeJoong.
Summary: Yunho is just eighteen years old and thought he had everything, until his parents told him of a promise they had made long ago ... With a vampire!
A/N: Unbetaed

Comments

[happy_girl89]

Spot for meh.

Added.((:

Hmm.. that's kinda legit explanation wh6 jae is somsecretive about his life to Yunho..
Now i wonder how will Yunho find out that he is in love with Jae .. with "no choice".. unless something miraculous will happen where Yunho can be some vampire that may have feelings to Jaejoong evenly, after he drink Jae's blood or whatsoever. (:

[soneayeong]

Jae is hiding things from Yun because he wants to protect him and telling him about his past is too painfull for Jae to do now at the moment...

But... Yun will learn more about the ritual in the next chapter, but he is not going to like it... >_

[snow_meow]

Poor Jaejoong.
In one night everyone in his family including his beloved sister is taken from him.

It's going to be interesting to see how from being a newborn vampire to until he meets Yunho for the first time.

[soneayeong]

I'm going to explain that in a later chapter ^^
Jae is now, almost hundred years later still sad about the death from his little sister... He really loved her.

But... Now he has Yun, but he can lose him in the next chapter >_

[gnoeltop]

This story looks good. Hope to read more. Thanks.

[soneayeong]

Thanks for the compliment!
This is the first time i'm writing JaeHo so it's still a little difficult ^^

I have updated the next chapter, Yun is going to discover more about the ritual.

[sheilapiglet]

so how come YH didn't turn into a new vampire like Jae did when he bit him?...he's still a human with normal eye color....guess that'll be explained later on...i look forward to more Yunjae in the next chapter...update soon!=)

[soneayeong]

I have explained in one of my previous chapters that a human needs to die before he can transform into a vampire, so Yun is only Jae's mate and his 'possesion'.

I have just updated the next chapter ^^
Thanks for reading my fic again!

[sheilapiglet]

oh...cuz I thot Jae was still alive when the vampire saved him..but after reading it over, I guess he killed him for a few seconds first before turning him into a vampire...but another question is why didn't he turn him into a "posession" as well since Jae was still alive?...I guess he was about to die anyways so he needed to change him completely.

will go read your next chapter now=)

[soneayeong]

I'm happy you like it!
I have just updated the next chapter and Yun will learn more about the ritual!