Fic: Bound in blood [OneShot]

[soneayeong]

Title: Bound in blood
Author: Soneayeong
Genre: AU, Horror, Angst, Smut
Rating: Nc 17
Length: One Shot
Pairing: YunJae
Warning: Evil JaeJoong and YunHo. Murder and blood.
Beta: DolphinatorSuSu
Summary:

“Kill something you love,
And you’re mine…
Offer me a pure innocent heart,
And you’re forever damned…
You’re forever mine,
You only don’t know it yet…”

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Comments

[totchi_sama78]

Am I crazy to actually liking this story ? Gosh I loved it ! Especially Jiji's murder, it was well described & I didn't even want it to end OTL Please write more things like this :D

Oh and there are some mistakes (wrong verbs) but it's okay :)

[soneayeong]

Oh really?
What where the mistakes?
Are there a lot? (English is nog my first langue, so i try to make it good)

And thanks for reading it,
I love horror, but haven’t write it before for this fandom (YunJae)

Edit:
My beta has send the wrong fic,
i'm editting it now ;)

[totchi_sama78]

It's okay :) English is not my native language too so I understand ^^
You wrote "learn" instead of "teach" , "their body’s where shaking." it's "were" and I saw something else but I forgot.

Your story is understable nonetheless

[soneayeong]

My beta is sending the correct fic to me, so i hope that the fic is ready a houre...

She has send me the wrong fic and deleted the good fic :(

Edit:
The fic is now good ^^

[chaebol]

*o* ohhh, i really like this. how yunho keeps pressuring jaejoong and then when he fell into temptation and followed yunho. :)) i like, even jiji. kekekeke. xD

thanks for sharing this story! :)

[soneayeong]

Thanks for reading!
This was my first YunJae horror but I’m posting soon a next one, its addicting to write horrors! ^-^

[chaebol]

oh yes, i know how you feel! it's very pleasant to read/write them. :) a new one already? can't wait. x)

[soneayeong]

Thanks for reading it if this is not you normal genre!

And thanks for commenting ^^

[uw1m4]

creepy? he he...
you are good...

[ramarumyun]

Now this is something! Although the ending could still be improved. Nonetheless, this is intriguing. :D