[ MGS ][ Snake/Otacon ]

[technophile]

Fandom: Metal Gear Solid.
Characters/Pairings: Snake/Otacon.
Rating: R.
Warnings: Implied sex.
Notes: For the MGS kink meme.

Comments

[infringe]

LOLOLOLOLOLOL A+

Re: Hello, I'm the OP

[technophile]

"So you want me to move my hand at less than 5mph but more than 4, at an angle of -"
"SNAKE"

[_dahne_]

That...was beautiful. Wonderfully IC. okay, they can do this, they've hugged before. Just not, you know, naked, made me laugh out loud.

Only thing is, well, why no dialogue markers?

[technophile]

Thanks! and ... I don't know, I just really dislike them ("dialogue IS action" mentality thing) and I stopped using them like two years ago and never started again, I like wrote like an 80 page FFVII epic with no quotation marks dfhgkfj

If you can tell who's talking then it works anyway! Or something egkjhfjf

[_dahne_]

True, but it does make it more difficult to read. Ever since James Joyce I've been put off by people using unorthodox punctuation to be special XD You don't need to. The words speak well enough for themselves.

[nghtwalkershido]

Oh god Zell <3

I agree with the quotations thing...I mean I could tell who was speaking but it was kinda annoying to have to think "Oh wait this is speech"

For whatever reason Otacon relating it to anime in some way made me laugh so hard XD

[harmonde]

HA HA HA HA HA XDDDDDDDD

I can actually see this happening. I love it!

[technophile]

I CAN SEE IT TOO and I don't know if that's like more sad or hilarious or cute gnaektghaekjthjhf

Thanks!

[darkfenixrising]

I laughed so hard at this -> Nipples? Nipples. Oh god, nipples. Why. What the heck is he supposed to do with them?

XD I could really picture him staring and thinking exactly that. XD

Great Fic. And good idea to include google. XD