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Distraction

Jul 14, 2010 02:52

Title: Distraction
Fandom: Battlestar Galactica
Pairing: Lee/Kara
Rating: NC17
Spoilers: 33, Razor deleted scenes
Summary: Kara can think of better things to do than watch the gun cam footage of the Olympic Carrier.
Author's Note: Written for bsg_pornbattle Prompt: at the movies. Thank to taragel for the beta read.

( Distraction )

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Comments 4

rayruz July 14 2010, 15:03:11 UTC

*SQUISHES ON THEM*

This is TOTALLY what happened after the Olympic Carrier... totally. Definitely. Yup.

callmeonetrack July 14 2010, 16:19:11 UTC

Mmm still love it. Especially the fact that even though they're urgent and doing this on a whim, you acknowledge that it's the first time and what that means and Zak and everything. Love all the details about how it still feels guilty but good.

And it's smoking hot. \o/ ;)

rdave1 July 14 2010, 17:23:34 UTC

This is HOT!!!

I love it. It wasn't planned but the feeling of guilty over Zak were acknowledged and in the end there was a possibility of more.

helikedmyshoes July 14 2010, 20:45:25 UTC

That is probably my favorite deleted scene, and I LOVE what you did with it. SOOOO hot, while still acknowledging the situation that they're in and all the history between them.

I really liked Lee's line: “Kara. There's a reason we never did this. There's a reason this has always been wrong.” And I also liked him admitting that he's wanted to do this for a very long time. And the sex was smokin'. YES.