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Apr 13, 2009 01:10

YOU FOUND ME AWAKE (BUT ASLEEP)
implied dean/castiel. rated pg. ~500
dean is suddenly and inevitably alone.
(c) title from ocean by margot & the nuclear so and so's

Dean cannot move in this mess. Hasn't moved for days and he can finally sleep. )

rating: pg, pairing: dean/castiel, fandom: supernatural, prompts: spn13

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force_oblique April 13 2009, 17:07:10 UTC
Oh, I really liked it hunni!!

Great start for a new series of amazing fics!!

There are these lines that completely stayed with me:
Hides him in insecurities, masking doubt and revelation and complete wonderment. - So amazing and true!!

It’s those fucking eyes, those mind-reading eyes, those dark eyes, those piercing eyes that just know. He is cruel in his ignorance and Dean hates those eyes, that angel. Fantastic bb!

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devilyouwere April 15 2009, 09:06:24 UTC
Thanks, darling! :D

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invisiblelove April 14 2009, 02:58:10 UTC
Oh ouch *hugs them both* Very atmospheric and poignant. Lovely job!

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devilyouwere April 15 2009, 09:06:35 UTC
Thank you :)

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queenjazzy April 14 2009, 21:43:37 UTC
And he still wants to call him Sammy,
That whole paragraph breaks my heart.

Before demon blood and angels and God and things he never wanted to understand.
That paragraph is just so Dean and it really sticks with me.

I really liked this. For something short, it was powerful. You did a wonderful job here and I look forward to reading more Dean/Castiel from you in the future.

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devilyouwere April 15 2009, 09:06:56 UTC
Thank you for reading and reviewing :)

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breakinporcelan April 16 2009, 03:50:01 UTC
Oh my gosh BB, this is just heartbreaking. But it's the good kind.

I loved how you captured Dean's anguish so poetically. Thank you for linking me to this.

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devilyouwere April 16 2009, 03:52:37 UTC
Thanks for taking the time to read! I was feel weird about self-pimpage :P

I'm glad you enjoyed it! Hopefully, there will be more to come.

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devilyouwere May 27 2009, 14:48:28 UTC
Thank you! (:

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