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So I've been working on this story since-- god. Let's just call it a year, even though I think it's been longer than that. (I think I could figure out the exact date by looking at the sga_flashfic archives, but that would just be depressing. I started writing it for the "superpowers" challenge, if that rings a bell for anyone.) At any rate, after a year of

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Right, where's the rest of it? (I'm serious.)

Dialogue and tech seem okay from what I can tell with just the snippet - but then SGA is not my fandom and I absorb all stories as standalone items.

In case you haven't already discovered it in your travels across the internet, this article may be useful (no, it is not a suggestion to burn it - but it might help you to make a useful decision)

http://hollylisle.com/fm/Workshops/burnit.html

A quick trawl through the rest of the workshops is always good for a refresher (remember it is not procrastination if you are honing craft skills).

Look forward to reading more.

Cheers
Pipi

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(Sorry, that was a really inappropriate icon to use with the above post.)