The end is here! Run for your lives!

[someidiothasice]

Title: Thou Shalt Not Covet 5/5
Pairings: Chris/Zach
Rating: R
Summary: He can't believe he's being so mature about this, but he loves his brother more than anyone else on this planet, save his mom. If this is what he needs to be happy, then Zach will grin and fucking bear it. As for the way he feels about Chris... Well, that isn't up for debate

Comments

[someidiothasice]

I'm definitely, definitely going to do a piece where Chris and Margo are alone in a room together. Another where Chris and Joe exchange some words, but the Margo one is right at the front of my mind. The family dynamic must be touched upon, because there is so much more to say in that aspect.

And I'm glad you enjyoed reading it, it was a lot of fun to write. Gah, I love the kink meme. Some of the prompts you find there are GOLD.

[domluver]

I dunno why but the thought never occured to me that Chris was just settling for Joe because he was like Zach. But that's brilliant. I really liked the end of this part. I'm happy they are together. And the way Zach reacted to Chris was adorable.

I hope you do continue with it, it's a fantastic read.

[someidiothasice]

I was a little worried about that, actually. I tried to hint how Chris was attracted to Zach, but I may have been too subtle about that. And about how Joe and Zach are really close, almost like the same person. I tried to have Margo say something to the effect, but I don't think it came out quite the way I wanted it to.

But thanks! I'm definitely gonna keep adding bits and pieces here and there. I already did a little prequel sort of a ditty to this, and I've got a short little epilogue coming soon. But there will be all kinds of sidenotes to this little universe my mind has made up, so I hope you enjoy those as well!

[masterofalltime]

I kind of love it a lot, too! :)
And I'm glad you've decided to add still more to the series.

For now, though, I like the quiet end. After all the emotional trouble they went through, it makes sense that they are drained. Also, this is about love, after all, not just quickly to be gratified lust.

[someidiothasice]

Yes, thank you! That was what I was going for. Ahh, this makes me feel much better =D

Very, very happy you love it.

[babykid528]

This end is SPECTACULAR!!! I love how you wrote Joe and his reaction. I love how you wrote Chris and Zach's obliviousness in regards to Chris. And then you end with promises of a revisit!!! :-D I really want to kiss you!!! <33333333333333

[someidiothasice]

Gah, thanks. This is what I needed to hear. So glad it worked for you.

And YAY! Kisses! You're making me blush here, man!

[bootson]

I ALWAYS thought the "he's like you" thing would come up eventually. And it makes me sad for Joe, but it makes sense.

And this ending is really perfect. I'm not adverse to any and everything you might write for it later, but I'm definitely thrilled with this!

Silly Zach being so oblivious and Chris being sort of subtle, but really most of it was straight up throwing himself in Zach's lap. Those little glimpses of what Chris did were great.

I've loved so much about this whole thing that I could probably gush at you for days. <33333

[someidiothasice]

Okay, whew! I was hoping it would've seemed that way, but just not sure. And yeah, it is kind of sad for Joe. But I see him getting over it easily enough. I mean, it's not as though he'd been carrying a torch for Chris for years or anything.

And yeah, Chris basically fell asleep with his face in Zach's naked lap. Zach was just kind of airheaded and "What, this isn't normal for straight guys? Really?" about it.

THANK YOU. Your reviews always make my day. This was awesome to find waiting for me in my mailbox =D Rock!