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somehowunbroken

Comment fic, again

Feb 25, 2011 06:47

Comment fic dump time again. Guys, I have written more than 20,000 words of comment fic this year. I really, really need to write actual stories, y'know? 6,138 words this time.

( Argue: Steve/Danny, they take their CHiPs debate all the way back to Steve's house where there might be some childish shoving & getting up in each other's faces... & then, you know... (*cough*sex*cough*) )

drabble, five-0, stargate

Comments 13

sexycazzy February 25 2011, 13:08:18 UTC

I loved the h5-0 fics, for me it was the last one before the stargate which is the favourite one, meeting the family! :D

And the stargate one - Ohhh! Makes me want to hug John tightly!

somehowunbroken February 25 2011, 20:04:08 UTC

Oh, meeting the family. Steve's nervous for no reason, silly boy :)

I really kinda want to hug John too, yeah. He really needs a hug.

kazbaby February 25 2011, 15:04:51 UTC

You made my morning... hell, my freaking world with the John/Cam fic. You always make me want more with these and this one is no exception. Awesome!

somehowunbroken February 25 2011, 20:02:45 UTC

Thanks so much! The more I think about i, the more I want to expand that... hmmm :)

emeraldsnakes February 25 2011, 15:51:49 UTC

Aww, all of these are just so awesome!

I love nervous insecure Steve because he's always so ninja and its good to see his character rounded out :D

And the John/Cam one? Soooooo makes my evil snow filled morning a while lot better. I like seeing these two on the opposite sides of the fence and yet still being so in love with each other despite it all.

somehowunbroken February 25 2011, 20:00:14 UTC

Thanks! I think Steve's got some insecurity under all that machismo for sure, and I think family brings it out of him - you can see it a little with Mary, I think.

And there's no way John would have been able to shoot Cam. It just wouldn't have happened.

padfootthegrim February 25 2011, 15:59:40 UTC

I love all of these, but my favorites have to be Steve and Danny in Jersey and Steve getting shot.

Very curious about Evil!Cam story though! That'd be an interesting AU :D

somehowunbroken February 25 2011, 19:57:20 UTC

I've toyed with the evil!Cam AU, but I'm not sure if it's going to develop into anything. It might, but I can't be sure :)

Glad you liked these!

gottalovev February 25 2011, 18:33:09 UTC

do you hear me complaining about you writing tons and tons of comment fic?

...

no! so keep on! those are FABULOUS! I'd love to see what is next on the Steve-got-busted-on-leave one =D

somehowunbroken February 25 2011, 19:34:48 UTC

I liked that one, mostly because I got to write about where I grew up because some actually wanted to hear about the place. But yes, that's followed by porn! Maybe I'll write it :D