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Chain Of Command (1/1)

Oct 08, 2010 00:33

Title: Chain Of Command
Author: somehowunbroken
Fandom: SGA/SG1
Characters: John/Evan/Cam
Word Count: 3,125
Rating: NC-17/porn in a big way
Notes: For theeverdream because she proofreads a lot of stuff for me and I said I'd write her fic, so, porn! And many many thanks to clwilson2006 because she proofread this, making sure that my typo-tastic-ness didn't get in the way of the story, and ( Read more... )

john/evan/cam, rating: nc-17, stargate

Comments 58

rubygirl29 October 8 2010, 13:41:28 UTC

I think you broke my brain. :-) Good thing it's my day off! And that means, I can read this again ... and maybe again. Who needs a brain anyway?

somehowunbroken October 8 2010, 15:27:28 UTC

I certainly don't need a brain, which is good, because it's currently filled with what these three started doing when they woke up. And what else is in the toy bag. And how Evan discovers that Cam may look all sweet and nice, but whoa, is he one kinky bastard.

:D

uran_chan October 8 2010, 14:44:54 UTC

I might have to join Evan in the cold shower.. you know, just to conserve water :3 It was really hot, but my fav parts were where you could see how much John cares about Evan <3

somehowunbroken October 8 2010, 15:30:43 UTC

Thanks dear! Yeah, he loves Evan, and he wants to make sure that everything's okay. Because there's no shame in safewording. And John wants to make sure that Evan knows that. :)

calcitrix October 9 2010, 01:42:36 UTC

:) and also the last line :D

somehowunbroken October 9 2010, 01:58:17 UTC

Thanks!

You just know they're going to have more fun with that bag.

You DID write it!!! ninja007 October 9 2010, 04:01:49 UTC

“Not bad from my end either,” Evan agrees. A thought suddenly occurs to him. “Is that entire bag full of-”

Mitchell just laughs. “I’m here for six weeks, Lorne. Of course it is.”

THAT just left me in a little puddle...

HOT! HOT! HOT!

Very well written and I could see them clearly.

Well done and thank you!

Re: You DID write it!!! somehowunbroken October 9 2010, 04:56:26 UTC

Thanks dear! Glad you liked it :)

theeverdream October 9 2010, 11:49:04 UTC

Oh YAY!!! :D:D

Very hot and favorite part is the paragraph where John is asking if Evan wants to come watch a movie. I could totally hear him saying all of that!

somehowunbroken October 9 2010, 17:34:40 UTC

Hehe thanks! Yeah, John's all about sharing... clearly. :D