Heartlines

Feb 07, 2012 00:09

Title: Heartlines
Author: somehowunbroken
Beta: shinysylver
Fandom: H50
Characters: Danny Williams and team
Word Count: 1,054
Rating: PG
Notes: Written for shoot_the_curl round two. My prompt: "Just keep following the heartlines on your hand" -Florence + the Machine, Heartlines
Summary: Danny shakes, after. Post-2x15.

Heartlines )

danny williams, five-0, steve mcgarrett

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simplyn2deep February 7 2012, 06:34:12 UTC
now this had me tearing up.

so beautiful

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somehowunbroken February 7 2012, 06:35:37 UTC
Thank you :)

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shinysylver February 7 2012, 06:39:57 UTC

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somehowunbroken February 7 2012, 07:08:13 UTC
:)

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and_ed February 7 2012, 06:41:12 UTC
Okay, first...points for the speedy coda, man. That was quick!

And gorgeous! Very real feeling throughout, from Danny's inner dialogue to everyone showing up to just be there. Lovely. =)

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somehowunbroken February 7 2012, 07:08:35 UTC
Thank you :)

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jesseofthenorth February 7 2012, 07:23:58 UTC
Great use of the prompt and awesome coda! Really well done :D

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somehowunbroken February 7 2012, 08:20:31 UTC
Thank you :)

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bandbfan February 7 2012, 08:19:34 UTC
Oh my goodness you are quick!
To use your prompt and have a coda ::loves::...
Steve's...I know what it’s like to play things over and over in your head... gave me tears
And Danny's pleas for Steve (to just hold him already)...just hurt my heart
So very well done ♥

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somehowunbroken February 7 2012, 08:21:04 UTC
Thanks so much :)

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