a little bit of headcanoning is a dangerous thing...

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Just a bit of potential background...

Comments

[prinnytern]

this was sinfully sweet

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lol, that was fast, Shikki! I hope you read the properly edited version. >>

And thank you, I'm glad you liked it!

[waterunder]

This. I love this. ;A;

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Thank you, Kat! I'm glad you enjoyed it. <3

[kellenanne]

That was more than perfect, I think. There are two lines that I absolutely adore and I cannot entirely say why:

Something in her heart broke and began to rebuild at the sight, and Gracia ran to him. and Maes’ arms held her up through the funeral, his eyes dark with sorrow and secrets when they lowered her brother to the dirt and her mother broke, screaming her grief to the grave.

Very, very nice.

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<333 Thank you, Kel.

I like those lines too. They were fun to write. It's been ages since I've really written something, and even though I look at this and just see 'raw and scattered' I'm glad that the emotion comes through.

/reiterates >>

[zhadra_ahni]

So I know you didn't mean for this to be sad, but because it's so lovely, they're so lovely, I was practically in tears by the end. ;A; As I sad, tragic with foreknowledge. This is such a great piece, Shira.

<333

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Thank you, Cam. I'm sorry I didn't warn you it was sad, but I'm really glad that you liked it!