same poets with a few edits by Dan Raphael

Nov 13, 2008 18:43

*Poets Dating Poets ( Read more... )

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argylerockstar November 14 2008, 10:58:01 UTC
Wow, Melissa. You just bubbled so much emotion to my surface. The following line made me think about how it will feel to lose that after David's mortality. Way to do your job, poet. ;)

All winter,
rain-heavy sky deepens,
we accidentally fall asleep
together.I memorize your heat.

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somanyroses November 14 2008, 14:53:39 UTC
Thank you! :) I really was memorizing it, too, true story.

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argylerockstar November 14 2008, 15:24:59 UTC
It's very beautiful imagery.

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ncjs48 November 24 2008, 05:36:21 UTC
love this love

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