Ratio | [Rated R]

[solsticezero]

Title: Ratio
Rating: R [I know, right?]
Characters: Suzie/Ianto
Warning: Suzie is one crazy bitch. This is nothing like what I normally write. Nothing. Note the rating. Take heed.
Thank you: curriejean for the beta, and the rating help, and not making fun of me

Comments

[nancybrown]

Very nicely done. I love your Suzie, and also how the two of them have their secrets over each other. :)

[solsticezero]

Thank you! :D You know, the point of the thing didn't come to me until I was halfway finished with it. I love when that happens.

[amand_r]

“And you’d only have thirty seconds back to tell Jack what a great shag he is.”

oh snap.

[solsticezero]

XD Suzie's pretty good for parting quips. "There's something moving in the dark, and it's coming for you."

[amand_r]

You speak the truth.

[teaboyfan]

What a stand-off. She was lethal, and Ianto could do whatever he had to for Lisa. At least Suzie's death bought him a little more time.

[solsticezero]

XD Love how you reference it as though it's canon. Thank you very much for the comment! The fact that her dying would actually provide him a little more security didn't occur to me; he may even have been relieved. That's terrible, isn't it? But understandable, sort of.

[thaddeusfavour]

Love the imagery and the intense sense of menace Suzie exuded. I really enjoy twisted Suzie fic.

[solsticezero]

Ah, thank you! I'm glad! And I'm happy that the feeling of menace came across.

Mind? What mind?

[missbob42]

Umm. Guh. This is... I'm sorry, are you after coherence? Damn fine characterisation. Keep up the good work! Crazy!Suzie is fun. Pity the goldfish and teaboys in her way!

Re: Mind? What mind?

[solsticezero]

Hah! Coherence optional. Thank you.