[FIC] Undisclosed Desires

[solookup]

Title: Undisclosed Desires
Rating: PG-13
Pairing/Characters: Eric Northman/Sookie Stackhouse (True Blood TV)
Word Count: 1,554
Summary: Sookie gets an unexpected visitor at night.
Spoiler: Up to Season 2 of TV series.
Disclaimer: The following story is untrue and I am only borrowing the names and in no way does this story reflect the characters

Comments

[willow_lives]

This is awesome!! And so freaking Bill. Petty and barging in all the time to ruin her moment with Eric. And Eric! Thank you very much!!

[solookup]

HEE. Bill is still very undisciplined. He's not very good at understanding the vampire hierarchy!

I'm glad you like it!

[myearthquakes]

Oh very nice very nice!!

leaving with a soft “Good night, Sookie”.
I can totally picture him saying that :D

[solookup]

He always has his manners *nods* UNLIKE BILL WHO BARGES IN.

I'm so glad Sarah Newlin is going to be on TV again soon *jumps* I HOPE SHE HAS BIG HAIR.

[bj_4ever]

She makes a note to herself to do a load of laundry tomorrow before sliding into her bed.
She should keep it... =p

Very nicely written!

[solookup]

She's too mannered of a girl to keep it ^__________^ She'll wash it and then obviously either Eric or her now has an excuse to get/give the shirt back. BWAH.

Thank you!

[bj_4ever]

Too bad her, where's the point of washing it?! j/k xD
(I remember a fic about the same thing a tshirt or something...)
But, hey you got a point!! lol
Now, you just have to write a sequel, I want Eric to has his tshirt back!! ^^

[dracodew17]

This was very nicely done. This tense is so hard to write sometimes, but you've done such an excellent job with it.

Just one teensy tiny thing:

His touch feels surprisingly hot against her skin as his hand finds its way under her shirt but only residing again on the small of her back.

Shouldn't it be her towel? I know it's just a minor thing, but it disrupted the picture I had in my head, you know?

Other than that, this was a very good little ficlet. Bill always seems to spoil the party, doesn't he? ^_~

[solookup]

LMFAO YES.

IT WAS UNBETA'D OKAY. WRITTEN AT 3 IN THE MORNING. And it *was* supposed to be a shirt, then I remembered a towel. Hesussss.

THANK YOU.

I'll stop typing in caps. Lemme go fix that.

I totally decided Bill was a cock-blocker near the middle. BWAH.

[alo12]

♥

He places the now-emptied bottle down on the coffee table. “You need to give in to the desire, Sookie. It’ll make things easier for everyone.”

She really does need to just give in.