All Good Things cont

Jan 08, 2009 12:00

Title: All Good Things (continued)

Part two )

finished, akame, fic

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gingifere January 8 2009, 22:13:57 UTC
IKSMJDKF,G,ML.,DMFKL.,MSKDLF;.,MB SOLLA FIC KANSJDK,FMJKLA.,S,KDLF.,.

Reading now.

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sollasollew11 January 8 2009, 22:19:33 UTC
ALKSDJLKJKLJSDF You. So fast *__*

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gingifere January 8 2009, 22:21:03 UTC
la,amsk i haven't actually read the first part...I just wanted first comment :D

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sollasollew11 January 8 2009, 22:22:17 UTC
LOL. Watch your enthusiasm wane after the first part :P

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gingifere January 8 2009, 23:01:58 UTC
masjkdmnf the bit with the cat made me so happy :( You always make me fall a little bit in love with Jin when you write him :( Why don't you write moreeeee Solla. You're so, so, so good and yet you keep it all locked inside your computer never to be seen by anyone else :(

I love how Hajime is Kame and yet at the same time he's not; he's Kame if Kame hadn't had to grow up so quickly and yet at the same time there's still that desperate desire to succeed, to prove to himself and to everyone else that he can be the best. That particularly shone through in the scene the morning after the fire with Hajime desperate to find Kame because if he doesn't it's another failure and well. We all know how Kame feels about failing.

AND THEN T-TUN KASJDKFJK. God, I love your KAT-TUN. They're such a bunch of complete
weirdos. And yet in my head that's probably how they do act around each other; weird and eccentric and dorky and rude to one another, but it's cool because they're brothers *___*

It was better now with experience on their side - dozens ( ... )

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sollasollew11 January 8 2009, 23:13:51 UTC
I don't know what to say except that I'm a bit in love with this comment. And YOU. You get it, especially with Kame and KAT-TUN because that's exactly the kind of relationship I've always seen them as having ♥♥

Ah, mistakes. Perhaps it's time I get myself a beta. Thanks for catching those :D

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gingifere January 8 2009, 23:20:41 UTC
la,sm I love you tooooo ♥♥ I'm glad, because in my head KAT-TUN will always just be this group of boys chucked together who've sort of had to grow up with one another, until they've found a dynamic that actually works. And that is why they're fascinating to me.

Dying. Well, I'm always here if you ever need me to look anything over for you (as long as it doesn't involve commas, as they are mine enemy :|) ♥♥

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matchynishi January 9 2009, 03:17:28 UTC
will come back for a detailed review during the weekend but just wanted to say this.

you can always figure out the kamerars through their fic, ne. xDDD

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matchynishi January 12 2009, 05:09:15 UTC
aah i fear this isn't going to be the most coherent review, i'm sleepy and tired but aljfa this fic cheered me up so! i'm always really surprised by how you can take like, the weirdest plots (it's a compliment, okay) and make them work so well. :( your kame(s) are always so good, and jin is so quintessentially jin. <333 love t-tun in here as well, they seemed really natural and supportive and quirky and alskfjla love. thank you so much for this. <333

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sollasollew11 January 14 2009, 22:11:12 UTC
Weird plots. asdlkfjlkj Weirdness comes hand in hand with JE, ok. The stuff is already there just begging to be played with.

I've never tried to hide my bias :P

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tretton January 9 2009, 20:02:22 UTC
aöjfdgajfdgakjfdg I love this idea. I LOVE THIS FIC.

....... Damn it Sarah's said everything already.... LEAVE SOME WORSHIP FOR THE REST OF US, WILL YOU. aödkjgfnakfd but I love the ambivalence of Jin's emotions. How he says he hates Kame but he never stops being jealous and then when they finally meet he just sort of awkwardly melts. Because it's Kame. And everybody knows Jin's sort of stupid but he'd never be stupid enough to not get that Hajime is Kame, despite all the ways in which Hajime is not Kame. aödkngf I just love your Jin in an extremely general way I guess. aödngf

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gingifere January 9 2009, 22:43:28 UTC
...Too slow Sophia, you're just too slow *smirks*

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tretton January 10 2009, 02:50:21 UTC
WHAT? IT'S JUST GOOD MANNER NOT TO HOG EVERYTHING. I'M JUST SAYING.

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sollasollew11 January 14 2009, 22:16:51 UTC
THANK YOU ♥

Mmmm. The focus always turns out to be on Jin. I love Kame. I am unashamedly biased towards the boy because he's fascinating and pretty and just a bit broken but I would have no idea where to begin writing from his perspective. It's a bit sad. I feel a bit like Jin in that respect.

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orange_smaug January 10 2009, 06:25:09 UTC
THINGS I DISLIKED ABOUT THIS FIC:

1.

Why can I never think of anything intelligent to say about your writing, let me flail about and shower you with praise instead *_*.

Also Junno was the best ♥.

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sollasollew11 January 14 2009, 22:18:36 UTC
...I highlighted the space after the 1. expecting there to be something written in super duper secret white text :(

Thank you ♥

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orange_smaug January 15 2009, 07:35:57 UTC
THINGS I DISLIKED ABOUT THIS FIC:

1. It's too awesome.

:3

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