“Sanzo-donooo!” came the cry as Goku launched himself into the room, nearly throwing the sliding screen off its track as he did so. “Make Gojyo-ni stop--”
When the two adults turned their gazes on him, the effect was instantaneous. Sanzo hadn’t even sufficient opportunity to express his irritation at the fact that Gojyo had already earned a ‘
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for me, it is the way the room opens to the outdoors, or alternatively - the way the outdoors merges indoors. the first one does with grace, the other one is a little raw .. perhaps.
the fic sounds .... incomplete, almost as if there was another chapter coming. or is that merely wishful thinking?
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Solitaire: Oh no; there's more. Uh, there's actually over 7,000 words, but I never intended for this to get published. It was written for Xpyne's enjoyment. She's the one with the pet!kink.
Xpyne: hells yea! LOLZ1!!!11eleventy
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X: hahaah, that's perfect, somewhere between confused and sexxy. =D glad you liked!
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Soli: I'm glad that you think so, even if I only wrote this because Xpyne is obsessed with pet stories. :/
Xpyne: I convinced her with my superior bribing skillz logic, aka Sanzo recieving Goku as a ward ::cough::pet::cough:: is CANON. So all that plot needs is a little sex and evil machinations and we're set. ♥
S: Utterly, utterly ridiculous... TAT
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S: ::cackles in the background::
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