Has hot chocolate~

[solerika]

This morning's observations:

- Ending!redhead's (Luke's) method of storing the Key of Lorelei makes wielding it impossible, or at the very least, impractical.

- Luke's glove bands are tightened to different lengths. His dominant hand's is tighter while the other is loose enough to flop around.

- Getting stepped on by Asch would hurt. The bastard

Comments

[silentdrifterz]

Video Games = Defies any and every logic.

Be happy Ookii doesn't wear shoes |D

...I'm also horrible at critquing, but I do like the bitty little sketch details here and there and the fact you left the sketchy bits in. :D

[solerika]

Seriously. Like, you never see anywhere that sells underwear. :|

...he could probably make himself some sandals. XD

Basics = D8
Details = 8D

Little things have always been my passion~ ♥ I'm trying to make my sketches neater, though I dunno if it's showing any. XD;

[silentdrifterz]

or a bathroom...

PFFF why does the thought of Ookii having sandals, funny? XD

Pff, you see how messy my doodle I did this morning is? I like seeing raw mess, but that's just me. My problem is going over an area way too many times.

And I think it looks a little better :o

[solerika]

..occasionally there's one of those. Like on the Tartarus. 8|b

Because it'd make him look like a beach bum? XDD

I haven't yet. :o *goes to check* .....MR. LONG HAIR FISH?? XDD And yeah, I tend to go over the same spot tons of times too, which is why the eraser is your friend. <<;

It's so hard to tell. orz

[teracia]

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I WANT SAI AGAIN. ;____;

And it looks gorgeous so far! I really want to improve also. XD; PEOPLE SHOULD CRITIQUE MY ART MORE TOO. #_#;

I'm very bad at giving critiques btw. -___-;

[solerika]

BAH, I KNOW! I'm already on trial day 19! DX At least it's not super expensive like Photoshop or Painter?! ;;

♥♥♥ I TRY TO CRITIQUE YOUR ART, BUT I GET CAUGHT UP IN THE AWESOME CLOTHING. 8|b I will do better, I promise. orz

You and me both. :'D So just tell me what you do and don't like about it? \:o/

[teracia]

I THINK? Lmao I forget how much SAI costs. XDD But I may have to look into it. or obtain an illegal copy like most of my programs.

DO YOU REALLY? LOL. I THINK I'VE BEEN FAILING WITH CLOTHING LATELY. D:; DO YOUR BEST AND I'LL DO MINE! ♥ XD

Hard to say what I do and don't like with a WIP (at least I think). XD Though I do like the sketchiness. I can hardly let myself get by with something so sketchy. >_<; So I admire people who have awesome looking sketches with it actually LOOKING like a sketch~! I always have to clean up everything to perfection when I draw. BAAAAH. DDDD:

[solerika]

Y5250, so around $53.00. XDD You're so bad...

YUS, I DO! I've always loved your clothing designs. \o\ IF YOU'RE IN A RUT, TRY LOOKING AT OLDER FASHIONS? ♥ OKAY! XD

The sketchiness is just because I can't ever get the lines neat enough. My hands shake to varying degrees, so I have to make do with short strokes. |D IF YOU ADMIRE THAT, THEN YOU'LL HAVE TO LOOK ELSEWHERE. <<; But your drawings always turn out so nice, so it's worth it, I think! ;3;

[juujuu119]

I personally don't see much of anything wrong with this. I love the soft colors, and I'm a huge fan of the sketchy style~

[solerika]

I can tell something is off, but I'll be damned to know what it is. |D Soft colors work well for lovey scenes~♥

[juujuu119]

Something about Asch feels off... maybe the forehead? Idk, I'm bad at critiques. XD

[solerika]

Definitely the forehead. Need to bring the hairline down some. *__*;;

[windychimes]

What's dA's policy now? I never read the ToS.

I love it~ There's nothing really to critique, except I think Asch's hair could use more definition, and less forehead.

But it's very nice :3

[solerika]

Basically they can use anything you put on there, including your name to promote themselves or to make their own products, I believe. :/

The damn anatomy distracted me from finishing poor Asch's lines. DAMN HIM AND HIS STUPID FOREHEAD. 8| But I think I hate Luke's arm more. orz

♥

[windychimes]

What the fuck. What money grubbing whores :/

I like Luke's arm :O I think Luke looks very pretty ♥

[solerika]

They've always had similar ToS during the five years I've been there, I think. :/

>///< ♥ *went and changed the arm back because of this* I really hope I don't crap out on doing this picture like I do with most of them. <<;