Comments | solanyxe: Merlin/Arthur The brilliant plan 01/06

solanyxe

Merlin/Arthur The brilliant plan 01/06

Jun 24, 2009 14:47

I have no excuse for this. An incubus bunny attacked me in the evening, and when I woke up, it was still there but together with five other little bunnies. Help?

Merlin/Arthur Fanfic
Spoilers: First season
Title: The brilliant plan
Summary: Arthur comes up with a brilliant plan to bed Merlin confess to Merlin
Word count: ~2.200
Rating: G - PG ( Read more... )

the brilliant plan, silly minific, merlin, omg a fic, merlin/arthur

Comments 19

archaeologist_d June 24 2009, 13:08:00 UTC

This was very cute. Poor Arthur, not knowing how bad that poem was. And Merlin being so oblivious not even seeing that it was him the poem was meant for. LOL. :D

solanyxe June 24 2009, 13:29:41 UTC

Thank you!
"Poor Arthur, not knowing how bad that poem was."
Yes, I suspect his (military) training didn't include the time to read love poems. XD

You'll probably find that his other attempts are just as bad as this one. XD

euraylie June 24 2009, 13:38:29 UTC

OH this was so adorable and funny. Poor Arthur. And I just bet the whole castle is going on about his blue eyes.
I think the woolen chest rugs are my favourite part.

Can't wait for part 2.

solanyxe June 24 2009, 14:17:33 UTC

Thank you!
I'm very pleased you liked it, as silly as the story is. XD

They are quite short and easy to write, so I think Arthur's flowers of love doom will be up soon. XD

givemethebook June 24 2009, 13:42:01 UTC

Oh Arthur! That poem is what every girl wants to hear. Keep trying, dear!

solanyxe June 24 2009, 14:19:35 UTC

I think Arthur would agree with you completely. It's just that Merlin is not sophisticated enough, but I'm sure Arthur will find the right way sooner or later. ;)

gealach_ros June 24 2009, 13:47:03 UTC

Awwww, Arthur, you are so, so adorable! *melts* And Merlin doesn't get it, oh boys. ❤

But sweetie, how could you leave us without a happy end??? I so hoped to see Merlin snuggle up to Arthur's sturdy and tender chestwool rugs. *sigh*

solanyxe June 24 2009, 14:22:23 UTC

:D
"But sweetie, how could you leave us without a happy end???"
Oh, give Arthur some time to experiment before he finds what works with Merlin. I'm sure he'll find the right thing in the end. <3

wiccaqueen June 24 2009, 14:00:39 UTC

This was so hilarious! Laughed my way through it. And I love Bard Tom XD
And Arthur is so cute, the things he will do!

Can't wait for the second part :-)

solanyxe June 24 2009, 14:26:11 UTC

Thank you a lot! :D
I'm glad it made you laugh.
And Arthur is so cute, the things he will do!
Oh, yeah, the things he will do. XD

*writing*