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sokorralewis

FIC: Who Knew? FINAL CHAPTER!

Apr 15, 2009 19:30

Title: Who Knew? (11/11 ( Read more... )

pairing: gibbs/jenny, character: jenny sheppard, pairing: abby/mcgee, fandom: ncis, character: timothy mcgee, character: tony dinozzo, fic: who knew, character: ducky mallard, character: kate todd, pairing: tony/kate, character: leroy jethro gibbs, character: abby scutio, fanfiction: chapter fic

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morgynleri_fic April 15 2009, 23:40:21 UTC

Um, I got the whole thing uncut on my flist page, it appears your cut-tag didn't take.

ladybeth April 15 2009, 23:49:52 UTC

Thanks for letting me know. *goes to fix* For some odd reason when I copy/paste the LJ cut goes away. Its only happened twice so far but its greatly annoying.

morgynleri_fic April 15 2009, 23:57:51 UTC

*nods* I haven't had that happen, but I have had LJ fail in other interesting ways when I copy-paste. It's always annoying.

ladybeth April 16 2009, 00:04:57 UTC

I think what happens is it gets highlighted by accident and the text replaces it.

Its worse when I update via the update page and not semagic.

cyad April 16 2009, 09:00:22 UTC

it's good.

“Are you kidding?” He asked with a smile. “They already know.”

LOL! Love the funeral scene and the italics bits you inserted though I got lost at some time. But I loved how it showed memories Kate had with Becca.

The next morning, the director pulled her aside as they all gather for breakfast.

Would've put Kate instead of "her". Just to make it clearer but aside that... great ending Book I chapter! *props*

ladybeth April 16 2009, 13:39:02 UTC

I'm glad you liked it:)

I'll make a note of that on my list of things to correct:)

cyad April 16 2009, 14:29:07 UTC

I did and it's really minor correction...

ladybeth April 16 2009, 14:31:39 UTC

:) Most of the correctiosn I need to make are minor mistkes, but combine them and you get a mess:)

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