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sokorralewis

FIC: Who Knew? (10/?)

Apr 08, 2009 00:24

Title: Who Knew ( Read more... )

pairing: gibbs/jenny, character: jenny sheppard, pairing: abby/mcgee, fandom: ncis, character: timothy mcgee, character: tony dinozzo, fic: who knew, character: ducky mallard, character: kate todd, pairing: tony/kate, character: leroy jethro gibbs, character: abby scutio, fanfiction: chapter fic, pairing: ziva/oc

Comments 3

xdawnfirex April 10 2009, 06:52:51 UTC

Just found this story. It's a good story, and I'm interested to see where you'll be taking things in the future. Hopefully this doesn't come out as elitist as it sounds in my head, but I'm going to say it anyway - it's a very good plot because it's kept me reading past the bizarre changes in tense and the odd grammar/usage mistakes that usually turn me right off ( ... )

ladybeth April 10 2009, 13:23:06 UTC

Thanks:)

Most of the problems with grammer and such will be fixed when I do the revisions. After a year of having severe writer's block in almost all fandoms, I was just so happy to be writing anything that I am just writing and not worrying about the revising/Beta yet so I don't end up jinxing myself. But I do plan a massive rewrite (and have been looking for a beta.). So hopefully that will help things out.

But thank you for pointing things out. I never knew about the tense changes.

Hmm...evil Semagic. *grumbles* Well, I guess I should be glad its readable, even if its up twice. Last time I ended up with strange little formating marks from Word. *goes off to fix* Thanks.

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Re: Beta Semper Fi ladybeth April 14 2009, 15:54:10 UTC

Alot of the mistakes I'm correcting are stupid stuff like then/than and its/it's.

Plus apparently I write ALOT of fragments when I do people's thoughts. And use Which as a statement alot. Word keeps trying to tell me that it should be that not which.