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Re: Who Knew Review ladybeth March 16 2009, 13:46:42 UTC
thanks:)

Hopefully chapter two (currently on page 4) will be as good.

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odakota_rose March 18 2009, 06:33:02 UTC
*grin*
Bookmarking this, I just got home and I'm a little too bushed to read atm [I know, I'm way behind on everything. again xD ] so I'm going to read in the morning. This looks really awesome though, can't wait to read it :D

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ladybeth March 18 2009, 16:08:41 UTC
Well, hopefully you will enjoy it when you get to it:) Its up to chapter 3 right now (and I haven't put the continue links in yet).

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odakota_rose March 19 2009, 06:46:57 UTC
*g* Just read this chapter, I'm liking it! I miss Tony and Kate...
I did notice a couple of spots where the tenses jumped around from present to past and vice versa, but those are easily fixed anyways, lol.
I'm gonna go read the other chapters you have up :D

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ladybeth March 19 2009, 14:35:04 UTC
YEah, none of this is beta'd yet. I think I"m going to wait till I'm finished before I revise,

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haltlos April 7 2009, 07:56:05 UTC
The start is really Kate: 'Okay, I know what I want. I can controll everything besides Tony. But I still have the controll.' Very nice beginning. Now I read the rest.

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sokorralewis April 7 2009, 18:01:30 UTC
I'm glad you liked it so far:)

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emlynijix February 20 2012, 02:44:33 UTC
Все стильно сделано
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