Fic: Memories of the Past Pt 3/??

[sokorralewis]

This is an unfinished product. It is chapter 3 of Memories and is missing a flashback scene and I think one other scene I wish to enlarge. Adria may make an appearance but *shrugs*  The main purpose for this posting is to get character feedback. Am I writing them ok? So any comments would be helpful

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Благодарю за инфу

[godewynlisum]

Прикольно :)