Comments | soidistant: close to the sun in lonely lands.

soidistant

close to the sun in lonely lands.

Jan 08, 2009 16:28

( The face on the monitor is handsome. )

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lusimeles January 9 2009, 14:27:26 UTC

Thanks! It all came at me really quick, for some reason, which was quite nice because I'm usually wracking my head for ideas that work. To be honest, I'm a little intruiged by the characters, too - this probably sounds insane, but as of now, they're still strangers to me... :o

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lusimeles January 9 2009, 14:28:04 UTC

I've realized lately I tend to do mysterious without even trying to, hmmm. Thanks a lot for reviewing! ♥

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lusimeles January 9 2009, 14:29:00 UTC

Yessssss. *pumps fist in the air* I'm really happy to hear that from you - from a writing point of view, I have a really high opinion of... your opinion? (That sounds odd, doesn't it?) But it's true :p

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lusimeles January 9 2009, 23:31:55 UTC

You don't post enough of your writing, but from what I've seen of your poetry, and of your general dedication to the craft... I'm quite inspired!

animus_mentis January 9 2009, 05:22:50 UTC

You know what would be great? If someday you turned this into a novel. I absolutely loved reading this short piece of work. It's concise and yet so full of emotion and intrigue. I love your characters and I would love to know more about each of their backgrounds. I'm curious: did anything in particular inspire you to write this or did it slowly/quickly manifest itself in your head? Whatever the answer, great work!

lusimeles January 9 2009, 14:30:25 UTC

That would be fun - hard and seemingly impossible from where I'm standing right now, but definitely fun. And thanks so much for the lovely compliments!

It was actually an image that popped into my head, of a young boy sitting underneath a tree, looking out onto the horizon. I guess everything else just snowballed from there - I wondered what he might be dreaming about, and I started to form his character, and the rest came along afterwards...

animus_mentis January 9 2009, 21:24:42 UTC

Fascinating. I'd like that part of my imagination to return, haha. It's very rusty.

lusimeles January 9 2009, 23:32:19 UTC

Mine comes and goes - the trick is not to ignore it! :)

carteyblanch July 22 2009, 05:56:11 UTC

I LOVE THIS.

We're talking about this over at lachasseaux, obvs. but I didn't want to not leave a comment here.

*mems*

soidistant July 22 2009, 06:26:11 UTC

♥♥♥

As you can tell, I am still really iffy on the romantic pairings. I think I've shipped everybody with everybody else by this point, haha :( I can't decide how I want this to go...