we cannot return

Jun 08, 2014 21:32


chen-centric, chen/suho, pg-13, 700
(free verse) jongdae waits for joonmyun at a place he can no longer remember.

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p: suho/chen, l: drabble, f: exo, !fanfic, l: poem

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darkyulate June 9 2014, 04:53:49 UTC
This is so painful and I'm listening to "Sometimes Love Just Ain't Enough" and the emotion in this is so painful. This was a great read ;____; I don't really know whether to thank you for this beautiful piece of work because it almost made me cry.

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sohyes June 9 2014, 12:44:51 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed it but I'm sorry I almost made you cry!! *hands you a tissue*
thank you for reading♡

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baekmebacon June 9 2014, 08:25:29 UTC
LET ME MOURN MY ENTIRE EXISTENCE. this is so beautiful, i wish he'd remember someday though.

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sohyes June 9 2014, 12:47:45 UTC
the original line the nurse said was actually "we are afraid his memory will mot return" but for both pattern and heartbreaking purposes I made it "his memory will not return" ~
thank you for reading and for your kind words omg ;~;

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ext_2590095 June 9 2014, 12:25:36 UTC
This burns me emotionally. Why. You do this to me.

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sohyes June 9 2014, 12:48:29 UTC
http://satsunon.tumblr.com/post/87335515403/ because the dancing person in the bg is actually me
thank you for reading!!

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snow_meow June 9 2014, 15:28:39 UTC
So bittersweet.

It's so sad when the person you love has forgotten you.

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sohyes June 10 2014, 01:29:01 UTC
that's what i was going for ;u;
thank you for reading~

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taerissa June 10 2014, 14:59:55 UTC
this is brilliantly written ahhh ;A;
<3333333 you captured the emotions perfectly TTT
thank you for writing!

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sohyes June 13 2014, 19:54:33 UTC
thank you for reading! i really appreciate the comment ♥︎♥︎♥︎

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