SPN Drabble - First Kiss; Dean/Sam; PG

Nov 08, 2008 11:24


Title:    First Kiss

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huntress69 November 8 2008, 19:59:54 UTC
Looking back, he said, “Don’t you dare apologize.”

“I wasn’t going to.”

Sweet...and I loved that you leave it up in the air as to which brother is which.

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softbluebuddy November 8 2008, 23:53:39 UTC
Thank you. I like to leave it up to the reader to decide. Glad you liked it and thought it was sweet.

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waxing_gibbous November 8 2008, 20:00:22 UTC
Wow, this was powerful! I loved this!

My favorite lines are probably: "They had to do it. Like they had to breathe."

Nice! I'll definitely be checking out some more of your stuff.

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softbluebuddy November 8 2008, 23:58:19 UTC
I am so happy that you came over for a read and that you loved it and found it powerful.

That was probably my favorite line too. If you look at any of my other stuff, I hope you like them also.

Thanks for the comment. :)

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waxing_gibbous November 9 2008, 01:36:24 UTC
You're welcome! I read it two or three times which I don't normally do with drabbles. : )

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softbluebuddy November 9 2008, 04:39:34 UTC
I had actually been lazy and hadn't linked my drabble master post here. If you are interested in short stuff, I now have a link at the bottom of the post for all of my drabbles.

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anorienparker November 8 2008, 20:15:19 UTC
Most excellent! So much, in so few words!

You are the awesome, my dear and I'm totally hooked! :D

*squishes*

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softbluebuddy November 9 2008, 00:00:04 UTC
Thank you for the comment and fb. I am pleased that you enjoyed it. ♥

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devon99 November 8 2008, 23:25:10 UTC
Ooohh, you and your ambiguous drabbles.

Okay - so for me it's Sam that initiated the kiss. Dean never would cross that line unless he knew that it's what Sam would want.

Nice use of the prompt as well.

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softbluebuddy November 9 2008, 00:02:03 UTC
Me and my ambiguous drabbles....LOL

Aren't they better that way, then everyone who reads can decide for themselves who is pinned against the wall and who started the kiss?

Glad you think this was a good use of the prompt. Thanks.

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saavikam77 November 9 2008, 00:45:38 UTC
Mmmm.. This. Yes. ~O_O~

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softbluebuddy November 9 2008, 04:40:10 UTC
Thank you. :) Glad you liked.

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