This is me, sending you lotsa luv. That was one long,evil tease, all the way to the end. I liked the hot/cold. Felt a little sorry for Sam though, being held out on like that :)Can't have been easy to keep his head on that long before he broke down. But what gets me the most is the care Dean takes. No matter how naughty it gets, he always makes sure Sam is with him. Totally awsome. And dirty. ::loves on you::
But what gets me the most is the care Dean takes. No matter how naughty it gets, he always makes sure Sam is with him.
Thank you so much for the kind words. If not for the love and the caring it wouldn't be much, would it? Thank you for picking up on that. I know a lot of people read for the smut factor, when people comment on the schmoop I actually do a little internal happy dance. *smooches you*
Well, there is no point without emotion and care. Porn is one thing, and that works in the short run. But for a lasting impression and to spark some actual interest you need the 'schmoop' in there. It falls flat without it.
I've got a preview of this one yesterday. Read it once more this morning when I got to work. I don't know if that says something about your story or my work, but your story wasn't a bit boring which my work is at the moment... Your story is really verbal and the dirty talking did spice up my day (a lot). I think that ropes are more erotic than cuffs, so your choice in this story didn't disappoint me in any way. Hot wax is unknown territory, but you makes it sound good, hot and cold has always been one of my favourites so maybe it's time to take to full step...
Thank you. I'm glad that it worked for you and in this one the rope was essential. Now all you need is a willing partner to take that full step. See, this one requires trust and commitment. I hope that you have someone in your life that you can take that step with. Go you.
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I liked the hot/cold. Felt a little sorry for Sam though, being held out on like that :)Can't have been easy to keep his head on that long before he broke down.
But what gets me the most is the care Dean takes. No matter how naughty it gets, he always makes sure Sam is with him.
Totally awsome. And dirty.
::loves on you::
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Thank you so much for the kind words. If not for the love and the caring it wouldn't be much, would it? Thank you for picking up on that. I know a lot of people read for the smut factor, when people comment on the schmoop I actually do a little internal happy dance. *smooches you*
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