Christmas Comment!fics [2011]

Dec 24, 2011 23:45

Merry Christmas, everyone!

Last year, I offered comment!fic in a number of fandoms as a Christmas present to all you lovely folk out there. I got some wonderful prompts and really enjoyed myself writing ficlets for them, so I’ve decided to do the same this year. For those of you who don’t know how this works, let’s go over things:

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naruto, lisa hallett, komatta toki ni wa hoshi ni kike, harry potter, ianto/lisa, john/sherlock, kiyotaka, ianto jones, james moriarty, tezuka kunimitsu, torchwood team, harry potter (novels), sherlock bbc, steven mcgarrett, fujishima takara, tezuka/ryoma, jack harkness, kiyomine/takara, seigaku, torchwood, jim ellison, star trek tos, jack/ianto, star trek 2009, blair sandburg, gwen cooper, hawaii five-0, hatake kakashi, kakashi/naruto, toshiko sato, jim/blair, steve/danny, daniel "danny" williams, prince of tennis, fic, the sentinel, hosaka kiyomine, hermione granger, sherlock holmes, owen harper, kashiwagi reiichi, john watson, janto, gen, owen/toshiko, christmas comment!fics, uzumaki naruto, kakanaru

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rocsfan December 24 2011, 16:18:08 UTC
This is so nice! I'd love to read about Steve/Danny on a ski or snowboarding trip!

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soera December 25 2011, 11:00:03 UTC
lesson #1

Steve moves a few feet, then falls over in a heap of limbs and skis and poles. Danny’s still cackling with glee when Steve finally manages to untangle himself and gingerly get to his feet again.

“You’re enjoying this far too much,” Steve tells Danny.

“I’m enjoying this the same way you enjoyed my surfing lessons,” Danny replies.

“Did you grow up skiing?” Steve asks. Does New Jersey have skiing? He thinks it does, but he really isn’t sure. He carefully shuffles forward, and looks alarmed when a step turns into an inadvertent glide.

“We went to the Alps every winter,” Danny lies blithely. “You’re going to -”

Steve falls. This time, he stays down, staring up at the sky wistfully and wishing he’d never let Danny talk him into this.

“Actually, I didn’t ski all that much,” Danny says, coming over with an easy grace that Steve is not at all jealous of. Danny does offer him a hand up, though, so Steve grudgingly accepts that Danny’s not completely evil ( ... )

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rocsfan December 25 2011, 16:40:36 UTC
That is wonderful!!! How clever to compare ski lessons with surfboarding lessons, and put the "ski on the other foot." Adn this is so perfectly the wayt they would behave. I love the "Occasisionally, maybe." Perfect way to end it. Thank you SO much!!

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trialanderror12 December 25 2011, 17:11:53 UTC
Hahahahaha. Not about to fold, huh? Didn't take him long to do so, considering ;) Of course, in the face of a smiling Danny, what else could he do?! Hee. Love it! I love Dany's unholy glee and the fact that he actually took surfing lessons! And I so love that Steve did cave in in the end, because omg he would have. They're just so adorable. Haha. Thank you for writing this! Love it : D

~T

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