Original Fiction - Flowering

[soera]

Original Fiction
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Mentions of death. Abstract little piece - try and make sense of it, heh.

Would appreciate if in your comments, you could just make a mention of what issue I'm trying to address here? Just want to see who gets it. Thanks! =)

Comments

[moffit]

I tried to make sense of it, but all I could think of was that it was the optimist versus the pessimist, and death still won out in the end because it was inevitable. Hey, it's 4:30am, I think I'm thinking coherently enough. 8D

[soera]

Well, optimist vs pessimist works well enough for the first half or so, but the second half is about something a little more specific... want to give it a shot? ^_~

[ying87]

stoned from tring to study econs, it sounds like this guy failed his jcts. esther's dead too, don't worry little boy..

T_T i'm dead. *sniff*

okie, if i really wanted to do pc. i would say its about life and how we may not want to follow the trends of life. the first part anyway -_- second part's way beyond my pc capabilities..

[soera]

Hm... wasn't what I was intending, though I can see why you'd say that... =S

[anonymous]

you try, but it's very futile, isn't it? and then... i don't know, you feel like a child again, do you? relearning everything, only to learn the same thing - that it's not worth the effort - but you tried too hard - if you let go perhaps the death wouldn't be so tragic.

i dunno, really. i think all of the above was a load of junk.

[soera]

Hah, now there's an interpretation I like. Wasn't what I was intending, exactly, but I think it's very applicable. =D

[anonymous]

o.O
The story is so pessimistic (but I like it! =D). Mm… the battle of hope and reality, and (ha!) the latter always win. The imagery is kind of grim though, but portrays life on this wonderfully crazy planet of ours true enough. Love the story! n_n

miak