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su24 September 20 2008, 14:05:43 UTC
i like the story :D it's realistic and its nice to see ryoma growing up :D

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pat_ace87 September 21 2008, 00:58:12 UTC
I LOVED IT SAIDVNDKFLJBNTIZDSLFJGKHBNDUZFVN IT WAS JUST OH SO WONDERFUL XXXXXXXDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you so much for sharing this with us, i reallu REALLY REALLY LOVED IT XXXXXOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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nicivin September 21 2008, 05:50:05 UTC
Beautiful.

It seemed totally in character to me, to the point it was painful (if that makes any sense at all).

As for the question, nothing specific comes to mind. I feel like it'd be something relating to experiencing the role of captain and having to do with being ridiculously proud of everybody.
. . . the idolization. Ryoma idolized Tezuka, Morikawa idolized Echizen. -and Ryoma's earlier comment about knowing what it's like to be Tezuka

I'm not very coherent at the moment. Sorry.

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jade_peace September 22 2008, 02:07:45 UTC
ASDFGHJKL;

This is just made of brilliance.

The characters were so perfect, the descriptions and wording dead on.

Really a lovely piece, thank you for writing!

Tezu: "I want your first kiss." Of course this means that the later sentence is actually “When you’re fully recovered, I want the first match /too/.”

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tezukaryo September 24 2008, 07:56:34 UTC
Aaaaw...so unbelievable brilliance that it leaves you breathless...the pillar of support *squeal*...and Tezuka's tender and lingering touches of Ryoma's knee *squeal & flail*...Ahhh, Tezuka buying gift for Karupin is just too cute *grin*...so amazing, wonderful, and awesome...best wishes and regards. ^__^

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