sadyfjsalfjsaljdf There were so many wonderful things I just loved about this.
Ryoma's conversations with Karupin at the start. How Ryoma remembers that time he ate lunch with Tezuka and only later realises that they didn't talk. The tennis, and the characterisation... Tezuka's family were excellent! The interrogation made me laugh. And I just adored how unspoken everything was.
It was sort of sad and heart-wrenching at the start, then happy, then bittersweet, and I just loved the build-up and the little asides and the writing style and you ended it in such a lovely way asdfjsdaljfdslkfj it destroys my coherency. The pacing was just perfect. I really can't find anything to criticise, because it has left me floating on a lovely warm cloud and I sort of just want to go hug something soft and squishy.
Superbly written. *____* Really tugged at the heartstrings, yet wasn't soppy at all. Thank you for making my day with this.
Youyouyouyou -- *points and flails* Dispossession! You wrote The Dispossession of Echizen Ryoma andandand --!
... And I never did review that, did I? O__O;
You have no idea how much I squeed when I saw this review; I had to wait a few days so you'd get something other than *SQUEEFLAIL* and even now...
Glad you liked the conversations with Karupin. They were some of my favourite parts to write, heh... if only because Ryoma's a lot cuter and easy-going around Karupin than around, you know, humans. And Ayana was way too much fun to write too. <3
I'm so glad you liked this, and I guess I'm taking this opportunity to tell you that your writing is amazing too and makes me go GUH *_* Thanks so much for the review!
O.o No amount of words are enough to describe this! It's entirely made of awesome! (See? How do you even fully describe awesom?) I love naughty/playful Tezuka who teases Ryoma. I love bratty/Fuji-like Ryoma. I love how Kawamura is not forgotten. People usually tend to leave him out or only mention him in passing. Great job! =D
I love writing Seigaku in general, so no worries about Taka-san being forgotten. The dynamics between all the regulars are just too much fun to play with. How can you not love Taka-san anyway?
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I love your characterisation and the interaction between Tezuka and Echizen, and Tezuka's mother made me laugh!
Post another fic soon!!!!!!
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Tezuka's mum was so much fun to write... though I think Karupin was still my favourite to write, heh.
I'm scribbling a few other ideas at the moment, but whether they'll become fully-fledged fic is another matter altogether. We'll see! ^_^;
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Ryoma's conversations with Karupin at the start. How Ryoma remembers that time he ate lunch with Tezuka and only later realises that they didn't talk. The tennis, and the characterisation... Tezuka's family were excellent! The interrogation made me laugh. And I just adored how unspoken everything was.
It was sort of sad and heart-wrenching at the start, then happy, then bittersweet, and I just loved the build-up and the little asides and the writing style and you ended it in such a lovely way asdfjsdaljfdslkfj it destroys my coherency. The pacing was just perfect. I really can't find anything to criticise, because it has left me floating on a lovely warm cloud and I sort of just want to go hug something soft and squishy.
Superbly written. *____* Really tugged at the heartstrings, yet wasn't soppy at all. Thank you for making my day with this.
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... And I never did review that, did I? O__O;
You have no idea how much I squeed when I saw this review; I had to wait a few days so you'd get something other than *SQUEEFLAIL* and even now...
Glad you liked the conversations with Karupin. They were some of my favourite parts to write, heh... if only because Ryoma's a lot cuter and easy-going around Karupin than around, you know, humans. And Ayana was way too much fun to write too. <3
I'm so glad you liked this, and I guess I'm taking this opportunity to tell you that your writing is amazing too and makes me go GUH *_* Thanks so much for the review!
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Thanks for the review! <3
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Oh, and btw? Icon love!
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