Criminal Minds: Trompe L'oeil (part 16)

[sodakey]

~ (part sixteen) ~

"Talk to me, sugar. What have you got for us?"

Morgan spins his phone to the middle of the table and glances from Reid to JJ. Reid rubs knuckles over his torn sleeve and doesn't make eye contact. He looks a million miles away and Morgan's trying to ignore it. Trying not to be bothered by being unable to fix it. Trying not to

Comments

[daylyn]

There's so much intensity and suspense to this story. It's utterly fascinating and completely vivid. Excellent. Looking forward to the next chapter... and waiting with bated breath.

[sodakey]

Thank you! Hope to have the rest emerging very very soon.

[girlkamikazi]

I can't tell you how much I love this. EVERY part has been amazing, and this one? Oh! I can't wait until you post again!! Huuuurry, please! :D

[sodakey]

Thank you so much. You are fantastically supportive.

Trying to get the rest out as fast as possible. :) Keep your fingers crossed.

[jujuberry136]

Gideon! Gah!

I had been so unsure if he was really there or not, well done on playing up the suspense and surreality of it all.

[sodakey]

Thank you so much! Hope the future of the story doesn't disappoint. ;)

[peach_megumi]

I knew it!!!

Sorry for not commenting on the past few chapters - things got a bit busy, but oh my goodness is this story amazing. Well worth the wait until I got to read more.

You have completely captured a feeling of tension and fear and disconnect that is at once off-putting and beautiful. It builds beautifully. Plus, your characterizations fit wonderfully. There have been various points when I could hear the characters saying your lines in my head as I read them.

And, I knew Gideon was the un-sub! It's perfect!

I cannot wait to see where it goes from here.

[sodakey]

lol. I think I had this fic on delay so long that everyone knew it, and figured it all out. No worries about not commenting on the last few chapters. I understand busy. My life ebbs and flows with busy. So my apologies for being on such a long hiatus.

Hope the off-putting is not too off-putting, lol.

Thanks again.

[lilmoonbunny16]

OMG!!!!! I've been waiting for a new chapter to be posted!!! I was just thinking about this story last night! I love the way everything flows in this story, from the events to the characters thoughts. I hope you will update soon! I need more! =)

[sodakey]

Thank you so much. Sorry for the long hold on this fic. Back in action now. Pray for no teenagers to run away in the next two weeks, and I think we'll have this out in no time. ;)