Deja-Bleu (A Spike/Fred Ficlet)

Jul 06, 2009 02:52

This is a short that I submitted for July's guest character (Fred) prompt at the nekid_spike community. It's rated PG-13 and set post-Not Fade Away, and at some point I hope to write a little sequel to it. After I finish writing another "In Dreams" chapter. Which hopefully will happen before we all grow long beards and die.

ETA: Sequels!Read more... )

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shakatany July 6 2009, 15:03:22 UTC
Oh yes please continue with it. Spike deserves someone nice like Fred and her being a bit damaged is nothing he can't deal with after having spent decades with Dru (and you could say that the Buffy he "had" was damaged from being brought back from the dead).

Shakatany

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sockmonkeyhere July 6 2009, 21:42:41 UTC
Thanks! I think it'll be fun choosing Fred's damage and how she'll react to it. kats_meow created a very touching damaged Fred in her Spike/Fred fic The Ghost and Ms. Burkle. (It's in the first section of the chapter below.)

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1599514/4/The_Ghost_and_Ms_Burkle

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rebcake July 7 2009, 01:47:30 UTC
I love this so much! You've started down a fascinating path that rings true for Spike. He's good with the damaged ones. Sometimes, I think it makes him love them more. Maybe because they need him, or he thinks they do. A chance to get it right, this time, would be irresistible to him. And Fred is so easy to love. (She has been through the mill, hasn't she? I keep forgetting, since she's so sunny.)

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sockmonkeyhere July 7 2009, 03:06:11 UTC
Thank you, Rebcake! *grin* Oh, dear, now I'm of a mind to really screw her up in some new and novel way.

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cafedemonde July 7 2009, 02:25:50 UTC
Heartbreaking and hopeful at once. Nicely done :-)

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sockmonkeyhere July 7 2009, 03:11:34 UTC
Thanks, Cafe! Hee, I was quite pleased with the title. I love bad puns.

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snickfic July 9 2009, 04:28:36 UTC
Ohhh. Very nice. I love how you wove both Buffy and Dru into this fragile relationship Spike has with Illyria/Fred. Lovely.

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sockmonkeyhere July 10 2009, 04:01:45 UTC
Thank you, Snickfic! I'm going to try to write something with Dru and Fred in the same scene pretty soon; they're both such oddballs that I think they'd be fun together. :D

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dreamincolor August 22 2009, 03:45:25 UTC
Lovely. Really lovely.

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sockmonkeyhere August 23 2009, 02:43:52 UTC
Thank you so much, Dreamincolor! I've cobbled together some little sequels for it; they're here: http://sockmonkeyhere.livejournal.com/19155.html
Two so far, but I'll be adding more as time and real life permit. ;D

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