Oh, this is really scary, with the claustrophobic setting and the urgency of the situation. It's also awesome with all the whump going on : )!! What's wrong with Steve? I think his broken rib pierced a lung... can't wait for the next part to know! Thanks a lot for sharing your story!
thanks, antivol. :) glad you are enjoying the whump and the setting. as to what is wrong with steve... you'll have your answer by the end of the week. there is only one chapter left. :)
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