there's going to be a lot of these, i hope you love me as much as i love you. i want to pay everyone back for the nice comments these past few months.
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so, i want to write some new things and have some new friends to write for (as well as writing for all
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First one, 547 words (!!! i got carried away XD):
specific condition of the atmosphere at a particular place and time1
pete/Patrick, thunderstorms.
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sometimes he keeps the television on in the background, trying to fill his half-heartedly furnished house with sound, letting the murmurs bounce off the pristine white walls.
(it’s stupid, i know, pete admits sleepily from patrick’s lap, where he has so easily and obnoxiously lain his head. but a lot of times it’s just me, here, and i can’t fucking stand keeping myself company.)
patrick knows this, and this is the reason he is in this hollywood-hills home again, playing pillow to a head too full of memories, self-doubt, Big Ideas. this is the reason they have long stopped coming up with flimsy excuses for why and here -- there is a push or a pull or a need, un-nameable, and that’s that. this is why he can ( ... )
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patrick knows this, and this is the reason he is in this hollywood-hills home again, playing pillow to a head too full of memories, self-doubt, Big Ideas.
^ That, and the rest of that paragraph, just. I adore what you do with words, and the image it creates, because YES.
somewhere in between paraguay (65°F) and peru (71°F)
^ I loved that line. I'm not quite sure why, but I did.
pete sneezes in his sleep right after a flash of lightning cracks the sky
^ That is, okay, one the MOST ADORABLE IMAGES EVER OMG.
thunderstorms till wednesday, moderate chance of sun later in the week.
^ I really liked the way you ended this, because even though everything isn't perfect, it sort of gives hope that everything is going to be okay.
In short: I loved this, and omg thankyouthankyouthankyou! ♥
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